According to the article, genetic modification process can be used for improvement of trees and the author presents several advantages of plantation of genetically modified tress, However, the professor refutes the points presented in lecture providing some counter arguments.
First of all, the author posits that survival chance of genetically modified tress is much greater compared to unmodified counterparts. On contrast, the lecturer challenges this argument saying that it may be true in some particular scenarios only. She also mentions that unmodified trees holds varieties of genetical states and chance of survival is greater in case of drastic climate change or deleterious effect of insects of pests. As, genetically modified tree is specially created considering general cases, it might fail to survive against dramatic changes.
Secondly, the author points out to the economical benefits of genetically moderated trees as farmer can get faster and greater return on investment. On the other hand, the professor explains that hidden costs are associated with this process which causes decline in profit. As farmer need to pay a considerable amount of money for seeds and can not collect seeds by their own, it would increase farming cost and consequently a reduction in profit.
Finally, the author brings up the idea of preventing over usage of wild trees and save endangered species by using genetically modified trees. The speaker disagrees with this idea and asserts that native trees would be damaged by moderated trees as they grow aggressively and out-compete normal trees from getting natural resources. Thus, the professor contends that these special trees would eventually destroy native trees.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
... Secondly, the author points out to the economical benefits of genetically moderated trees...
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Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nefits of genetically moderated trees as farmer can get faster and greater return...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1373.03311258 107% => OK
No of words: 264.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54545454545 5.08290768461 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79610118168 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 145.348785872 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617424242424 0.540411800872 114% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 419.366225166 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8586071777 49.2860985944 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.090909091 110.228320801 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 21.698381199 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.06452816374 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.458414111787 0.272083759551 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164298782576 0.0996497079465 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923659924649 0.0662205650399 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264940884175 0.162205337803 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077610807512 0.0443174109184 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.3589403974 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.8541721854 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.0289183223 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.2367328918 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.42419426049 115% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 63.6247240618 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.7273730684 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.