The lecture and reading are discuss about genetic modification, while the reading stats that genetic modification is beneficial for tree production,growth,cooping capacity and provides three reasons and example of support. The professor refutes this, saying that genetic modification is not benefits for tree.
First of all, the reading claims that genetic modified tree are more hardier than natural tree. It survive more damaged condition than natural tree. However, the lecture argues that some genetic modified tree are become exposed in registered condition. Moreover, the professor stats that genetic modified tree are exposed when climate change or past attack. Some natural tree can be survival on hard condition but genetic modified tree can be wiped out or damaged.
Secondly, the reading posits that genetic modified tree are have a economic benefits. It give very short time production and grow faster. The lecture counter this point by saying that headen cost are involve for planting genetic modified trees. Costing of seed are very high and if you plant new seed from that genetic modified tree you need to pay the company who made the seed.
Finally, the reading passage think that genetic modified tree prevent overexertion of tree. It help to meat the basic need of human. However, the professor refutes this point by saying that genetic modified tree grow very aggressively that damage other tree. it damage the surrounding climate and trees. Genetic modified trees are competes with natural trees.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'discussed'.
Suggestion: discussed
The lecture and reading are discuss about genetic modification, while the r...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , growth
...cation is beneficial for tree production,growth,cooping capacity and provides three rea...
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Line 1, column 263, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... The professor refutes this, saying that genetic modification is not benefits for...
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Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'hardier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: hardier
...g claims that genetic modified tree are more hardier than natural tree. It survive more dama...
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Message: Did you mean 'survives'?
Suggestion: survives
... are more hardier than natural tree. It survive more damaged condition than natural tre...
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Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...g posits that genetic modified tree are have a economic benefits. It give very short...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...its that genetic modified tree are have a economic benefits. It give very short t...
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Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gives'?
Suggestion: gives
...d tree are have a economic benefits. It give very short time production and grow fas...
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Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'involved'.
Suggestion: involved
...is point by saying that headen cost are involve for planting genetic modified trees. C...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat headen cost are involve for planting genetic modified trees. Costing of seed ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...netic modified tree prevent overexertion of tree. It help to meat the basic need ...
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Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
... tree prevent overexertion of tree. It help to meat the basic need of human. Howeve...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ry aggressively that damage other tree. it damage the surrounding climate and tree...
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Line 7, column 264, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'damages'?
Suggestion: damages
...aggressively that damage other tree. it damage the surrounding climate and trees. Gene...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...trees are competes with natural trees.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 30.3222958057 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1373.03311258 94% => OK
No of words: 239.0 270.72406181 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39748953975 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68230535109 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506276150628 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 419.366225166 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3904871487 49.2860985944 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.625 110.228320801 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9375 21.698381199 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06452816374 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 4.19205298013 358% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.548765620843 0.272083759551 202% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.226716459732 0.0996497079465 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107553327389 0.0662205650399 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.366427644874 0.162205337803 226% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829180391391 0.0443174109184 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.3589403974 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.2367328918 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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