Reading talks about genetic modification which is a process used to change an organism's genetics and hence its characteristics. to improve trees production farmer begin to modify tress genetically. However, lecturer made claims on all mentioned advantages of genetic modification in the reading passage.
First of all, author of the reading suggests that genetic modify trees are much hardier as compares to other natural trees. For example, in Hawaii city papayas is a species of tree which are most resistant to virus while farmers get modify them genetically. On contrary, the lecturer refuse that modify trees are much better hardier .She argues, that it is wright that genetic modification increase the ability of trees to be more resistance against virus but, if climate have begin to change the trees would not survive their self. And virus would stay remain to distract the trees.
Second, writer mentions that genetic modification bring huge economic benefits for those who grow them. Because, once trees go thorough genetic modification they will grow fast. And will produce enormous food,fruit. On the other hand, professor claims that farmer will be benefited economic when trees became modified. Furthermore, she said that seeds of trees are less capable to grow fast as fast due to climatic changes. And each modify trees required three farmers until they could handle them so, they are supposed to extra pays to farmers for seeding.
Finally, reading states that genetic modify trees will reduce the exploitation for other wild trees in nature. Due to requirement of people about consumption of firewood is high, people can prefer to make genetic modification process wider in order to fulfill their requirements. However, speaker said that when modification process begin to started trees would grow aggressively and would be hard to prevent wild trees due to actively damage them. He puts forth that, trees by modification process grows after a long time. And the wild trees consumption will increase by people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'organisms'' or 'organism's'?
Suggestion: organisms'; organism's
...on which is a process used to change an organisms genetics and hence its characteristics....
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...genetics and hence its characteristics. to improve trees production farmer begin t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed advantages of genetic modification in the reading passage. First of all, aut...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...t genetic modify trees are much hardier as compares to other natural trees. For ex...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...hat modify trees are much better hardier .She argues, that it is wright that genet...
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...t modify trees are much better hardier .She argues, that it is wright that genetic ...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'begun'.
Suggestion: begun
...ance against virus but, if climate have begin to change the trees would not survive t...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nomic benefits for those who grow them. Because, once trees go thorough genetic modific...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , fruit
...row fast. And will produce enormous food,fruit. On the other hand, professor claims t...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'trees'' or 'tree's'?
Suggestion: trees'; tree's
...s grows after a long time. And the wild trees consumption will increase by people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, so, while, for example, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.01324503311 279% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1373.03311258 124% => OK
No of words: 324.0 270.72406181 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27160493827 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63127375716 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 145.348785872 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537037037037 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 419.366225166 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.5196110359 49.2860985944 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8888888889 110.228320801 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 21.698381199 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06452816374 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.50747834422 0.272083759551 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171573447718 0.0996497079465 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824934812172 0.0662205650399 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.334626225351 0.162205337803 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590455042146 0.0443174109184 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.3589403974 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 63.6247240618 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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