The passage is mainly about ethanol fuel which is made from corn ans sugar plants instead of gasoline.Writer has mentioned many disadvantages of ethanol fuel which is being used by many people in United States as a alternative to gasoline.But speaker has contradicted many points as compared to the lecture.
First,writer has mentioned that due to the production ethanol fuel carbon dioxide is being released which causes global warming and trap head.But speaker contradicted the point as ethanol fuel does not cause global warming but it helps to remove carbon dioxide from the environment.
Second,ethanol fuel will reduce the amount of plants available for use of other fuel and 60% corn if used to produce ethanol cause animals disappear as per the passage but speaker says that ethanol can be produced through the plant cellaeous which is not eaten by animals.This is another point where we can experience contradicted theory.
Third,ethanol will never able to compete with gasoline in price.If this gas is not given to produce its price will be more than gasoline but speaker argues that when there is more production of ethanol then its price will reduce then gasoline.This contradicted the passage directly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Writer
...rn ans sugar plants instead of gasoline.Writer has mentioned many disadvantages of eth...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...used by many people in United States as a alternative to gasoline.But speaker has...
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Suggestion: But
...ted States as a alternative to gasoline.But speaker has contradicted many points as...
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Suggestion: , writer
...nts as compared to the lecture. First,writer has mentioned that due to the productio...
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Suggestion: But
...ich causes global warming and trap head.But speaker contradicted the point as ethan...
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Suggestion: , ethanol
... dioxide from the environment. Second,ethanol fuel will reduce the amount of plants a...
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Suggestion: This
...cellaeous which is not eaten by animals.This is another point where we can experienc...
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Suggestion: , ethanol
...experience contradicted theory. Third,ethanol will never able to compete with gasolin...
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Suggestion: If
... able to compete with gasoline in price.If this gas is not given to produce its pr...
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Suggestion: This
...hen its price will reduce then gasoline.This contradicted the passage directly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 22.412803532 45% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 1373.03311258 75% => OK
No of words: 196.0 270.72406181 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.04702891845 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88381771669 2.5805825403 112% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 145.348785872 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 419.366225166 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 13.0662251656 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 21.2450331126 231% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 23.0258007461 49.2860985944 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 257.25 110.228320801 233% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.0 21.698381199 226% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06452816374 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.490855910781 0.272083759551 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.295767076769 0.0996497079465 297% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496142862262 0.0662205650399 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295767076769 0.162205337803 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496142862262 0.0443174109184 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.8 13.3589403974 208% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.28 53.8541721854 25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 5.55761589404 234% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 11.0289183223 214% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.06 12.2367328918 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 63.6247240618 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.7273730684 182% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.498013245 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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