TPO-23 - Integrated Writing Task Populations of the yellow cedar, a species of tree that is common in northwestern North America, have been steadily declining for more than a century now, since about 1880. Scientists have advanced several hypotheses expla

In the given set of material, the main topic has centered on what causes might result in the decline in the yellow cedar population, a particular tree species in North America. While the author proposed three hypotheses, the speaker in the follow-up material cast doubt on those points in a number of ways.

The first point in the article is that insect parasites were likely to be responsible for its anticlimax as the beetle larvae have eaten its wood. However, this was questioned by the lecturer as he mentioned that all evidence has shown that yellow cedar species had chemical substance acted as an insect resistance and those attacks also have been observed to the damaged population, not healthy one.

Moreover, according to the essay, high sugar content in the cedar ingredient might attract bears to fulfill their sweet's feeding habits. Nonetheless, the orator discussed that decrease in the amount of cedar trees in both area with and without bears logically proved that they could not be the culprit.

Last but not least, the writer has stated that changes in the weather climate especially from the harsh winter to the spring caused a problem for the cedar root sensitive system and it hindered its growth. Conversely, according to the lecture, most damaged cedar trees have lived in lower elevation with higher average temperature.

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Average: 8.6 (1 vote)
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'conversely', 'first', 'however', 'moreover', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'while']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.268292682927 0.261695866417 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.154471544715 0.158904122519 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0853658536585 0.0723426182421 118% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0406504065041 0.0435111971325 93% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0284552845528 0.0277247811725 103% => OK
Prepositions: 0.138211382114 0.128828473217 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0569105691057 0.0370669169778 154% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.53624612185 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0243902439024 0.0208969081088 117% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.130081300813 0.128158765124 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0121951219512 0.0158828679856 77% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00406504065041 0.0114777025283 35% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1358.0 1645.83664459 83% => OK
No of words: 223.0 271.125827815 82% => OK
Chars per words: 6.08968609865 6.08160592843 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.04852973271 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.37668161435 0.374372842146 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.269058295964 0.287516216867 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.174887892377 0.187439937562 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116591928251 0.113142543107 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53624612185 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650224215247 0.539623497131 120% => OK
Word variations: 70.5940836189 53.8517498576 131% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0529801325 61% => OK
Sentence length: 27.875 21.7502111507 128% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4837930535 49.3711431718 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.75 132.220823453 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.875 21.7502111507 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 0.878197800319 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.39072847682 0% => OK
Readability: 54.7808295964 50.5018328374 108% => OK
Elegance: 2.07272727273 1.90840788429 109% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.717497495322 0.549887131256 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.140318424467 0.142949733639 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0667584253715 0.0787303798458 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.749297214766 0.631733273073 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.091490984238 0.139662658121 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.386953375622 0.266732575781 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854769850935 0.103435571967 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.333486194661 0.414875509568 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0671224054241 0.0530846634433 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.499882354545 0.40443939384 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169712056968 0.0528353158467 32% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.26048565121 47% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.49668874172 57% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.62251655629 110% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.1766004415 63% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.2958057395 78% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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