A species of tree are in decline in northwestern North america because of insect parasites, brown bears, and change of climate which is not approved by the lecture.
A kind of insect by the name of beetles attack this tree which cause to destroy the tree, also a brown bear claw this tree to gain the barks from this tree, and this cause to destroy the tree too. In addition, gradually changes in climate over 100 years cause the roots to grow in winter rather than growing in early spring, so these causes attribute to decline in this specie of tree.
However, the lecture denies the points made in the reading and adds, the real cause of decline is not known yet. Beetles cannot damage the trees, they only attack on damaged trees.Also, this insect did not cause for damaging of this kind tree. Brown bears attack some trees, but not all of them. Moreover, this species of bear have decline in this area of america, and there is no bear in island, so the bears are not cause in the decline of this tree. Winter did not kill the roots of this tree because in winter the elevation is high, trees are die in low elevation, in the result climate did not contribute to decline in this species of tree.
To sum up, the lecture disagrees with the points made in the lecture with above reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 70, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'destroying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: destroying
...of beetles attack this tree which cause to destroy the tree, also a brown bear claw this t...
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Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...rees, they only attack on damaged trees.Also, this insect did not cause for damaging...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, in addition, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 12.0772626932 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 30.3222958057 152% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 1373.03311258 77% => OK
No of words: 237.0 270.72406181 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45147679325 5.08290768461 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1108098371 2.5805825403 82% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 145.348785872 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459915611814 0.540411800872 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.0 419.366225166 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.6711989557 49.2860985944 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.222222222 110.228320801 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 21.698381199 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06452816374 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401630664546 0.272083759551 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176822683267 0.0996497079465 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101071594458 0.0662205650399 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225197160996 0.162205337803 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143079539931 0.0443174109184 323% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.3589403974 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 12.2367328918 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.42419426049 85% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 63.6247240618 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.7273730684 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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