Both reading and lecture talk about the discovery of a T rex leg bone which go back to seventy milion years ago and still has some actual animal tissues. The reading article descripes what these tissue might be. While, the lecture has a lot of skypticals about these informations in the reading passage.
First, the reading supports the idea of presence of remains of real blood vessels. The bone has many small branching channels that correspond to location of blood vessels with the presence of a soft, flexible organic substance. Yet, the professor holds another opinion. He says that these remain not necessary remains of blood vessels. It is mostly a residue left by bacteria colonized the holes and channels.
Second, the reading says about the presences of remains of red blood cells. These spheres under examination showed presence of iron, which is the main content of red blood cells and give it the reddish color. However, the professor has a different opinion. He says that reaserchers found the same spheres in other fossils of animals that do not have red blood cells. And the dark color is a result of reddish minerals.
Third, the reading approves the presence of living collagen. Collagen is the main fibrous protein of the living bone tissue. On the other hand, the professor refuses this idea. He says that as it is know the collagen can not live more than hundred thousand years. Finding collagen in this T rex bone most probably return to be a part of the researchers' skin not
Independent Writing Task
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this tissue' or 'these tissues'?
Suggestion: this tissue; these tissues
...ues. The reading article descripes what these tissue might be. While, the lecture has a lot ...
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Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e descripes what these tissue might be. While, the lecture has a lot of skypticals ab...
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Line 4, column 199, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...efuses this idea. He says that as it is know the collagen can not live more than hun...
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Line 4, column 240, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...now the collagen can not live more than hundred thousand years. Finding collagen in thi...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, still, third, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1373.03311258 96% => OK
No of words: 270.0 270.72406181 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87037037037 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45364430396 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 419.366225166 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4083167884 49.2860985944 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0555555556 110.228320801 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 21.698381199 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 7.06452816374 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.09492273731 147% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.27373068433 304% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409614376512 0.272083759551 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114656852 0.0996497079465 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089564106675 0.0662205650399 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154735552198 0.162205337803 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114144168668 0.0443174109184 258% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.3589403974 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.8541721854 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.0289183223 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 12.2367328918 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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