Both Reading and listeneing passage are discussing about Animal fossils which are actual animal tissue fossils. The lecturer cast doubt on the claims the author made.
First, the reading passage claims that breaking of fossilized leg bone of dinasursos where blood vessels were once located, remaining blood vessels and collagen.The lecturer refuts this by saying that hollows and soft flexible was not blod vessels
Moreover, the author argues that microscopic examination of various parts of inner bone revells that there is red blood cell. The lecturer states that traces of organisms that was left by bacterial colonies was for permanent animals and was different organism.
On the other hand, The reading passage is talking about collagen which was found in long bones of Dinosaurs. On the other hand,the lecturer states that the collagen are for 10000 years animal and it is more recent source than researcher 's bone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 161, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...d, remaining blood vessels and collagen.The lecturer refuts this by saying that hol...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...microscopic examination of various parts of inner bone revells that there is red ...
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Line 6, column 127, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ng bones of Dinosaurs. On the other hand,the lecturer states that the collagen are f...
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Line 6, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it is more recent source than researcher apos;s bone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, as for, talking about, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 22.412803532 40% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 30.3222958057 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 1373.03311258 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 148.0 270.72406181 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32432432432 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 4.04702891845 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37703432539 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 145.348785872 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614864864865 0.540411800872 114% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 419.366225166 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0662251656 46% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 103.491411345 49.2860985944 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 131.333333333 110.228320801 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 21.698381199 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.06452816374 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323121231823 0.272083759551 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136340043868 0.0996497079465 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115229027984 0.0662205650399 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189766648344 0.162205337803 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728435976015 0.0443174109184 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.3589403974 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.2367328918 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.42419426049 109% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 63.6247240618 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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