The article states that zebra mussel change its habitat to North America for three reasons and they are main danger for other fishes.However the professor explains none of the author's reasons are convincing and refutes them one by one.
to begin with, zebra musse's spread is unstopable ships helped them to move from canals that are bult to connect Europe's waterways in the way that this fishes can attach to bottom of ships and can be survived.As the reading claims, is refuted by the professor.He asserts that in before people coudent control the population of this fishes because of lacjing of knowledge but today they can cntrol it .Furthermore, this fishes cant survive during the ship's travels.
In addition, according to the essay when zebra mussels carried to new habitat they can overcome to all other fishes because they dont have any predators and this fishes can reproduce in large numbers.Nevertheless, the proffesor argues that this fishes in early time do not have predator but over times some birds migrate to this place and they eat zebra mussel's alot.
Finall, based on authors opinion zebra mussel's eat plangton and compete with other fishes in food .On the contrary, the professor shows that instead of being harmful this fishes have advantage for other fishes because they may provide a circumstances for increasing plangtons therefore, the number of foods for all will increase.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, in addition, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 231.0 270.72406181 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11255411255 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62635380334 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588744588745 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 419.366225166 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 13.0662251656 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 21.2450331126 268% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.6650935223 49.2860985944 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 295.25 110.228320801 268% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.75 21.698381199 266% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.0 7.06452816374 368% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 4.19205298013 453% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373988222314 0.272083759551 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.217566397842 0.0996497079465 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044775831982 0.0662205650399 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217566397842 0.162205337803 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044775831982 0.0443174109184 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.5 13.3589403974 236% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.62 53.8541721854 25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.0289183223 231% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.25 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.63 8.42419426049 126% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 10.7273730684 261% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.498013245 236% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 11.2008830022 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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