The reading and the lecture are both about a journey of Robert E.Peary in which he made a journey to north pole. The author in a article believes that peary claim is justified by providing an evidence. however, a lecture refutes such claims are unreasonable. author believes that expedition made by peary is skeptic.
first of all, the author claims that committee formed by national geographic declared a claim was valid after a assessment evidences and records of pearls account, as it was found to be reliable and persuasive. however, a lecturer refute such evidences. he believes that the committee member of were Peary friends, thus making a decision in favor of Peary. furthermore, an investigation was conducted only for 2 days, causing superficial examination of evidence and making a biased decision.
secondly, author implied a expedition done by Pearls are possible, since Avery, his counterpart, using same breed of dog, had done a same expedition within a less than 37 days ( as Pearl completes in 37 days). this claim is disagreed by author. the lecturer, says that during transportation, a weight carried by Avery is far more less than Peary, making him easier to complete the journey in short duration. in additional, journey taken by Avery was in favorable climate which further aids in completion of journey in short period. however, Peals, having a heavy weight and unfavorable condition, leads to grueling journey making it all most impossible within 37 days.
finally, author calls up a evidence using a pearls photograph shadow taken in North pole on that days by measuring a surf position in the sun. he says that a surf position calculated from his photograph corresponds the to the exact surf position in that day. however, it is opposed by a lecturer. he claims that a photograph taken by Pearl is 100 years old, leading to blurred and faded images. since, a calculation, requiring a great accuracy, finds it difficult to examine precisely due a faded images.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Peary
...re are both about a journey of Robert E.Peary in which he made a journey to north pol...
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Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... a journey to north pole. The author in a article believes that peary claim is ju...
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Suggestion: However
... is justified by providing an evidence. however, a lecture refutes such claims are unre...
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Suggestion: Author
...e refutes such claims are unreasonable. author believes that expedition made by peary ...
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Suggestion: First
...expedition made by peary is skeptic. first of all, the author claims that committe...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...raphic declared a claim was valid after a assessment evidences and records of pe...
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Suggestion:
...red a claim was valid after a assessment evidences and records of pearls account,...
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Suggestion: However
...as found to be reliable and persuasive. however, a lecturer refute such evidences. he b...
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Suggestion: He
...ever, a lecturer refute such evidences. he believes that the committee member of w...
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Suggestion: Furthermore
...us making a decision in favor of Peary. furthermore, an investigation was conducted only fo...
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Suggestion: Secondly
...idence and making a biased decision. secondly, author implied a expedition done by P...
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Suggestion: an
...d decision. secondly, author implied a expedition done by Pearls are possible...
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...condly, author implied a expedition done by Pearls are possible, since Avery, his...
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...me expedition within a less than 37 days as Pearl completes in 37 days . this cla...
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Suggestion: .
... 37 days as Pearl completes in 37 days . this claim is disagreed by author. the ...
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Suggestion: This
... days as Pearl completes in 37 days . this claim is disagreed by author. the lectu...
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...ys . this claim is disagreed by author. the lecturer, says that during transportati...
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Line 5, column 327, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'less' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: less
...ation, a weight carried by Avery is far more less than Peary, making him easier to comple...
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Suggestion: In
...complete the journey in short duration. in additional, journey taken by Avery was ...
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Suggestion: However
... completion of journey in short period. however, Peals, having a heavy weight and unfav...
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Line 5, column 559, Rule ID: HEAVY_WEIGHT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'heavyweight'?
Suggestion: heavyweight
... short period. however, Peals, having a heavy weight and unfavorable condition, leads to gru...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it all most impossible within 37 days. finally, author calls up a evidence usin...
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Suggestion: Finally
...all most impossible within 37 days. finally, author calls up a evidence using a pea...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...n 37 days. finally, author calls up a evidence using a pearls photograph shad...
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Suggestion: He
...y measuring a surf position in the sun. he says that a surf position calculated fr...
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Suggestion: However
...to the exact surf position in that day. however, it is opposed by a lecturer. he claims...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
.... however, it is opposed by a lecturer. he claims that a photograph taken by Pearl...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...d, leading to blurred and faded images. since, a calculation, requiring a great accur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, in addition, in short, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 30.3222958057 152% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 5.01324503311 339% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1373.03311258 121% => OK
No of words: 330.0 270.72406181 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03636363636 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86500105255 2.5805825403 111% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 145.348785872 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 419.366225166 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3926124777 49.2860985944 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3333333333 110.228320801 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 21.698381199 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06452816374 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 4.19205298013 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.27373068433 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34361166618 0.272083759551 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993696633059 0.0996497079465 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723219822561 0.0662205650399 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2010117686 0.162205337803 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617772347166 0.0443174109184 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.3589403974 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 63.6247240618 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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