Development of cutting-edge technology in today's world have made a world better places and made our life easy, luxurious and convenient than our grandparents life when they were children. Further more, anticipation of invention of more newer and sophisticated technology are believed to make our progeny life more and more easier.
At first, the basic needs of people - foods, clothes, shelter- are available in abundant amount in present world than past. In 1960, Higher number of people died and suffered due to famine condition, leading a chaos in a country, however in present time, we are, due to development of agricultural technology and government focus on agriculture, deprived from such tribulation. Similarly, as Humans, due to various reasons, we have to migrate and these migration were gruesome in past. Venturing into woods, crossing river by swimming, People have to walk for several days, without slipper or shoes and making their expedition abortive, some of them died due to drowning or eaten or attacked by wild animals. In additional, the most prominent factor that ease the present life is development health facilities. People in past died due to simple disease such as diarrhea, chlorea, even with, common cold, but in today world disease simple and fatal- disease in past such as leprosy, tuberculosis- are curable. Similarly, there was also a scarcity of education. There a petty amount of teachers and schools, and even if they got a chance to go to school, they were not provided with books, copies and pencils, impeding their education and they also have to walk several miles to attend the classes from their home. However, such situation is totally extirpated in present time.
War is always cruel some, affecting the nations as well as citizen and the past life is primarily involved in engagement of wars. For instance, During second world war, mine grandparents parents as well as his companion were in battalion, fighting for Germans. My grandparents said that it was the most plaintive time of theirs lives. There was increase in tax, got in ration, exploitation of labors, during that time and death of the soldier adds further suffering to family member( especially to children who have to grow with out their parents). In contemporary times, in spite of certain minor wars, majority of nation want to preclude absorbed in conflagration. Further more, because a low payment were provided to children, there was also a tradition of child labor, so the children were forced to work in industries,hotels, precluding them from their childhood enjoyment, education.
In conclusion, due to increase in avant-garde technology, awareness of people in present world, the adversity most of people used to suffered in past are mitigated in present world and due further development of sophisticated technology, there is a further promising advancement of people life in future than past and present.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dge technology in todays world have made a world better places and made our life ...
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Line 2, column 233, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'newer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: newer
...ther more, anticipation of invention of more newer and sophisticated technology are believ...
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Line 2, column 320, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...ieved to make our progeny life more and more easier. At first, the basic needs of people...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s in a country, however in present time, we are, due to development of agricultur...
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Line 4, column 390, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...prived from such tribulation. Similarly, as Humans, due to various reasons, we ha...
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Line 4, column 450, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this migration' or 'these migrations'?
Suggestion: this migration; these migrations
...various reasons, we have to migrate and these migration were gruesome in past. Venturing into w...
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Line 4, column 480, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...grate and these migration were gruesome in past. Venturing into woods, crossing river b...
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Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...especially to children who have to grow with out their parents. In contemporary times, i...
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Suggestion:
...y times, in spite of certain minor wars, majority of nation want to preclude abso...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , hotels
...ildren were forced to work in industries,hotels, precluding them from their childhood e...
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Line 8, column 111, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... people in present world, the adversity most of people used to suffered in past are mitigated ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, similarly, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 87.0 52.1666666667 167% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2465.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 472.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22245762712 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89312170093 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529661016949 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 771.3 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.7979390123 48.9658058833 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.944444444 100.406767564 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2222222222 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128495256096 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420791591069 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409088565902 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901538120053 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609010667362 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 86.8835125448 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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