TPO 28- Robert E. Peary was a well-known adventurer and arctic explorer who in 1909 set out to reach the North Pole. When he returned from the expedition, he claimed to have reached the pole on April 7, 1909. This report made him into an international celebrity. Though some historians have expressed doubts that Peary did in fact reach the North Pole, three arguments provide strong support for the truth of Peary’s claim.
While the reading states that Robert E. Peary , a famous adventure, reached the north pole, the lecturer challenges the statements made by the author of the reading. The passage says truth of the Peary's claim supported by some historians; however, the lecturer is of the opinion that none of these theories is correct.
First of all, the passage claims that a committee investigated Peary's annals and tools. It argues that Peary's records were compelling and asserted that he actually got to the north pole. This argument challenged by the lecturer. She says that the committee members were not objective enough because they were Peary's close friends who invested on this trip, therefore the conclusion was biased and unreliable.
Secondly, the author of the reading asserts that actually Robert E. Peary reached the north pole after 37 days. This is supported by the claims that a British adventurer made the exact way in less than 37 days with the same tools and dogs,so Peary's claim is not impracticable. The lecturer,however, rebuts this by asserting that there were several differences in speed issues between these two explorer. She elaborates on this by mentioning that the British explorer carried much less weight than Peary, and the air condition was very good compare to Robert E. Peary, also food supply of the British adventurer supported by air planes.
Finally, it is stated in the article that there are several pictures taken by Peary to support his claim about reaching the North Pole. The article establishes that the Sun's position in pictures stand for the Sun's position in the north pole. The lecturer , on the other hand, posits that these evaluations were inaccurate. This is supported by mentioning that these photos were blurred and faded, so the measuring was not compelling enough that the photos were taken at the North Pole.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... the reading states that robert E. peary ,a famous adventurer, reached the north p...
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Suggestion: The
...ments made by the author of the reading.The passage says truth of the pearys claim ...
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Line 2, column 88, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: It
...e investigated pearys annals and tools. it argues that pearys records were compell...
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Suggestion: This
...that he actually got to the north pole. this argument challenged by the lecturer. sh...
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...is argument challenged by the lecturer. she says that the committee members were no...
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Line 2, column 355, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , therefore
... close friends who invested on this trip,therefore the conclusion was biased and unreliabl...
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...y reached the north pole after 37 days. this is supported by the claims that a briti...
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Suggestion: , so
...han 37 days with the same tools and dogs,so pearys claim is not impracticable. The ...
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Suggestion: , however
...claim is not impracticable. The lecturer,however, rebuts this by asserting that there we...
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Line 3, column 340, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun difference seems to be countable; consider using: 'several differences'.
Suggestion: several differences
...ebuts this by asserting that there were several difference in speed issues between these two explo...
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...his by asserting that there were several difference in speed issues between these...
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Suggestion: She
...peed issues between these two explorer. she elaborates on this by mentioning that t...
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Line 4, column 254, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...position in the north pole. The lecturer , on the other hand, posits that these ev...
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Suggestion: This
...that these evaluations were inaccurate. this is supported by mentioning that these ...
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Line 4, column 354, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ccurate. this is supported by mentioning that these photos were blur and faded, s...
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Line 4, column 379, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'blurred'.
Suggestion: blurred
...d by mentioning that these photos were blur and faded, so the measuring was not com...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1373.03311258 113% => OK
No of words: 304.0 270.72406181 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08223684211 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64597273758 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 145.348785872 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496710526316 0.540411800872 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 419.366225166 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0602929489 49.2860985944 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5625 110.228320801 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 21.698381199 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06452816374 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 4.19205298013 382% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.443690029149 0.272083759551 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148337949758 0.0996497079465 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130990099379 0.0662205650399 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278159818598 0.162205337803 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158858176874 0.0443174109184 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.3589403974 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 63.6247240618 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.