The author provides three reasons to show that Edmontosaurus's found in Alaska's North Slope were migrating south to survive during winter. The professor, however, explains that the reasons provided are not convincing and refutes each reason.
First, the author states that Edmontosaurus vegetarian diet supports his claim because there was no vegetation in North Slope during winter. The professor dismissed this claim by recalling us that in their period the weather was warmer than today and there was a good plant life during summer. So, in winter this creature can nourish on dead plant and hence there was adequate food in winter for them.
Second, the author said that scientist found many skeletons in the same excavation site which shows Edmontosaurus lived in a herd and since migratory animals live and migrate in a herd, Edmontosaurus were also migratory animals. Although the professor accepts that Edmontosaurus live in a herd, she refutes author's claim. She explains that there are several other reasons for Edmontosaurus to live in a herd like providing extra protection. In addition, she gives Rosevelt elk as an example that lives in a herd but does not migrate.
Third, the author explains that Edmontosaurus were capable of migrating long distances. However, the professor disagreed because she believes that the juvenile Edmontosaurus were not able to migrate in such a long distance and the adults could not leave their child behind. As a result, all Edmontosaurs should stay in Alaska's North Slope during winter.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.Use specific reasons and examples to 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 287, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t leave their child behind. As a result, all Edmontosaurs should stay in Alaskas ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, second, so, third, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1373.03311258 94% => OK
No of words: 246.0 270.72406181 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27235772358 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72499962858 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552845528455 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 419.366225166 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6445255051 49.2860985944 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.083333333 110.228320801 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06452816374 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293545693211 0.272083759551 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111686691843 0.0996497079465 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640079061151 0.0662205650399 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171769011006 0.162205337803 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433381606216 0.0443174109184 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.3589403974 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.8541721854 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.2367328918 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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