TPO 3 - Integrated:
Rembrandt portrait -the woman with fur collar-
In the reading, the author claims that the famous portrait in Rembrandt collection, which depicted the woman's face with fur collar, was eliminated from the official catalog of Rembrandt paintings in the 1930s due to 3 problems regarding it. However, finding all the ideas questionable and plausible, the professor casts doubt on what is presented in the text and brings some evidences to the contrary.
At first, the author argues that there is a lack of congruity in the woman's dress which combined the servant linen cap with the costly coat with fur collar. Conversely, the lecturer brings up the idea that the recent scrutinizing of this portrait has revealed that the fur collar is not the part of the original painting. Indeed, this piece was added deliberately on the top of the original art virtually 100 years after it had been drawn. She said that perhaps someone thought that if the appearance of the aristocratic woman seems better, the value of the portrait will be raise.
In addition, the reading passage holds the view that the shadows and lights are not coordinated perfectly because of entirely bright face of the woman. On the other hand, the lecturer disputes this point by clarifying the fact that in the Rembrandt original painting, the color was simple without dark fur that reflected the light. Consequently, removing the fur, we can see that the combination of shadows and lights is perfect such as others Rembrandts' artwork.
Finally, the author asserts applying the glued pieces of wood instead of only the one wooden panel as the last point for supporting this portrait does not attribute to Rembrandt. The lecturer, thought, dismisses it by pointing out that having added the fur collar, that person forced to attach additional piece of wood in order to increase the value of painting. Furthermore, another crucial point is that according to the recent examination the wood of this portrait is the same as another prominent painting ascribing Rembrandt, the self-portrait with the hat.
- TPO 27 integrated writing : Little Ice Age 90
- TPO 21 81
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, conversely, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 30.3222958057 148% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1373.03311258 123% => OK
No of words: 334.0 270.72406181 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04491017964 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66090193019 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 145.348785872 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568862275449 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 419.366225166 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.330119516 49.2860985944 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.416666667 110.228320801 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8333333333 21.698381199 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5833333333 7.06452816374 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353229905453 0.272083759551 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11918908472 0.0996497079465 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911848909852 0.0662205650399 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208588640957 0.162205337803 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518844397391 0.0443174109184 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.3589403974 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.8541721854 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.0289183223 114% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 63.6247240618 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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