In general, todays all people need job to support their life needed. Since people spend a significant part of their life time for working and earn money it's very important for all people to do a job which enjoy of doing. people wonder having a job that work only three days a week for long hours is more enjoyable or have a job that work five days a week for shorter hours? As far as I’m concerned, having experience both situation, I agree with second grope. In what follows, I will provide two reasons for my answer.
Admittedly, if people have a job that work shorter hours reserve their energy and time for spending more time with their household members. It's obvious that people work for improve their lifestyle and enjoy of their life; Moreover, everybody know that it's very important to spend time with household member to have funny time and enjoy of being together, It's be a part of human being that everybody like to have relationship with others. Therefore, it's indicate that if a person has a job that work shorter hours a day, he has energy and more time to spend with his household members and better enjoy of his job and life.
The second reason for my viewpoint is that having plan for our life make we enjoy of our life, so a job that can give us a regular plan for our life is more enjoyable. People who work five days a week have regular work to doing every day. This people have plan for their all section of life, for example, they know when they can buy a house because they have a regular schedule in their life. On the other hand, people who work three days a week have four days free it's promote them to go vacation every week and spend their money and time. They don't have any regular plan for their life so one day they find that how much they make mistake to spend their time and money for none.
all the aforementioned reasoning bring us to the conclusion that have a job that work five days a week not only give time and save people's energy to spend their time with their household members and enjoy it, but also give them a regular plan to enjoy of their life time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...eople spend a significant part of their life time for working and earn money its very imp...
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Line 1, column 222, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...eople to do a job which enjoy of doing. people wonder having a job that work only thre...
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Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...k have regular work to doing every day. This people have plan for their all section ...
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Line 3, column 257, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
...rk to doing every day. This people have plan for their all section of life, for exam...
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Line 3, column 547, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ek and spend their money and time. They dont have any regular plan for their life so...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: All
... spend their time and money for none. all the aforementioned reasoning bring us t...
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Line 4, column 262, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...e them a regular plan to enjoy of their life time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 22.412803532 254% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1373.03311258 125% => OK
No of words: 393.0 270.72406181 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36132315522 5.08290768461 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.04702891845 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11399699361 2.5805825403 82% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.40203562341 0.540411800872 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 419.366225166 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 21.2450331126 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.1165982087 49.2860985944 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.428571429 110.228320801 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0714285714 21.698381199 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06452816374 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11514280104 0.272083759551 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586262822759 0.0996497079465 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309044654862 0.0662205650399 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895461477289 0.162205337803 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145504246713 0.0443174109184 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.3589403974 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.0289183223 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 12.2367328918 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.42419426049 81% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 63.6247240618 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.498013245 126% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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