the author gives hypothesis on the quackers strange sounds during the roman patroling in , while the speaker opposses those hypothesis by dismmissing the authors claims based upon ocra whales ,giant squid , and submarines from another country.
the writers first theory is that ocra whale produce those sounds when thy make sounds to attract male ocra ;however the speaker reveals that thease ocar whales generally live near the surface of water whereas subamrines are in the deep ocean .if ocra whales are near surface of water then sounds produced by ocra whales to attract male ocra are not justified.
not only ocra whale sounds but also giant squid is citied by the writer as they emit sound which are reffered to the strange siunds detected by submarines . never would the lecturer support this thesis remarkbly saying that the giant squids are lived from the early 1980 and are still there bt the sounds were observed only for two decades .so this doesn't justify on sudden ______of sounds.so both wahle and squid are not the reason of strange sounds as the author suggest.
a final theory stated by the essayist is that submarines from another country may be patroling near by the russian submarine with new technology which may have some advance tech which can't be detected .disputing this point the speaker remarks that sub can/t move quickly or change directions and no new tech have bee introduced which can't detectthe predence of another sub nearby
so authors another theory failed to expalin the strange sound beeing heared by the russian people patroling in that area
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, still, then, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1373.03311258 97% => OK
No of words: 264.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0303030303 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21589316001 2.5805825403 86% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 419.366225166 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0662251656 38% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 21.2450331126 245% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.552820644 49.2860985944 236% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 265.6 110.228320801 241% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.8 21.698381199 243% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.4 7.06452816374 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 4.19205298013 525% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389423020815 0.272083759551 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209930068298 0.0996497079465 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628165390056 0.0662205650399 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196237434477 0.162205337803 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590727049101 0.0443174109184 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.7 13.3589403974 215% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 27.16 53.8541721854 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.0289183223 203% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.42419426049 115% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 10.7273730684 261% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.498013245 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 23.0 11.2008830022 205% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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