TPO-32 - Integrated Writing Task Starting in the 1960s and continuing until the 1980s, sailors in Russian submarines patrolling the North Alantic and Arctic Ocean would occasionally hear strange sounds. These underwater noises reminded the submarine crews

In the given set of materials, the main topic is centered on what can be the origin source of anomalous sounds called "quackers". While the author has proposed three commonly theories, the speaker in the follow-up material challenged them in a number of ways.

The first point in the article is that as orca whales colonized in the same location and made a similar sound in order to mate with a male, it might be the noise of calling each other. However, this was questioned by the lecturer as she stated that if it was related to orcas, not only could the noise be detectable as it was produced near the water surface but also it had to be visible with sonars.

Moreover, according to the essay, the source of sounds might be giant squids lived in deep ocean without any hard tissue. In this regard, these species could not be observable by sonars. Nonetheless, the lecturer states that this bizarre sound stopped about two decades in the 80s, which caused the assumption to be invalidated.

Last but not least, the writer has asserted that this sound might emit from other military submarines designed with a high technology to be invisible. Conversely, according to the orator, the technology would not progress at this pace to produce such a fast and silent submarine.

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Average: 8.6 (1 vote)
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'conversely', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'while']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.188 0.261695866417 72% => OK
Verbs: 0.168 0.158904122519 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.1 0.0723426182421 138% => OK
Adverbs: 0.044 0.0435111971325 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.024 0.0277247811725 87% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136 0.128828473217 106% => OK
Participles: 0.056 0.0370669169778 151% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.71948244597 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.032 0.0208969081088 153% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.136 0.128158765124 106% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.028 0.0158828679856 176% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.008 0.0114777025283 70% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1292.0 1645.83664459 79% => OK
No of words: 222.0 271.125827815 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81981981982 6.08160592843 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.04852973271 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.324324324324 0.374372842146 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.238738738739 0.287516216867 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.157657657658 0.187439937562 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0990990990991 0.113142543107 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71948244597 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 145.348785872 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612612612613 0.539623497131 114% => OK
Word variations: 62.2287510611 53.8517498576 116% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0529801325 69% => OK
Sentence length: 24.6666666667 21.7502111507 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3841479673 49.3711431718 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.555555556 132.220823453 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 21.7502111507 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.11111111111 0.878197800319 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.39072847682 0% => OK
Readability: 48.5405405405 50.5018328374 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.61016949153 1.90840788429 84% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.592706663557 0.549887131256 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.132460129712 0.142949733639 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0603624097715 0.0787303798458 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.697635738422 0.631733273073 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.113928839652 0.139662658121 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.302063620575 0.266732575781 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10297863438 0.103435571967 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.350219039645 0.414875509568 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0488428564469 0.0530846634433 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.411155699596 0.40443939384 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322645638714 0.0528353158467 61% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.26048565121 94% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.49668874172 29% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.62251655629 110% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.1766004415 126% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.2958057395 87% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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