TPO 37- One of the threats to endangered sea turtle species is the use of nets by commercial shrimp-fishing boats. When turtles get accidentally caught in the nets, they cannot rise to the surface of the ocean to breathe, and they die. Some people suggest
Actually, both the passage and the lecture discuss about the method called turtle excluder device that is used in order to decline turtle death in nets which trap shrimp. The passage brings three theories for revealing disadvantages of TED; nonetheless, the professor puts those reasons under question. According to the professor notion, none of these provided reasons are convincing.
First, as the passage mentioned considering the fact that the number of turtle that are caught are so a few that not only isn't this method efficient but it also is extremely costly. However, the lecturer doesn’t reinforce the idea by adding the fact that there are almost one thousand shrimpers; therefore, they caused several turtle to be killed; besides, she expressed the fact that the industry of shrimp depends on shrimp fisher.
Next, as the passage illustrate there is an alternative method which contribute turtle to be safe that happens when fishing time decrease. Although the lecturer claims that it is theoretically an appropriate idea, controlling the time is counted as a difficult task which need monitoring.
Finally, the passage criticizes the method by emphasizing the short size of TED's holes that inhibit large turtle to escape; nevertheless, the professor says that small ways can be refine to convert the device to a proper one that both fisher and turtle can take the advantages of that.
- Essay topics: TPO 43 : Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect. In your opinion, which of the following is the best thing to do?— Interrupt and correct the mistake right away.— Wait 76
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- TPO 33 88
- integrated essay from TPO 16 85
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...t are caught are so a few that not only isnt this method efficient but it also is ex...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, finally, first, however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 226.0 270.72406181 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25221238938 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71900764699 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606194690265 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 419.366225166 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 21.2450331126 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.7782555906 49.2860985944 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.375 110.228320801 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.25 21.698381199 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.375 7.06452816374 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158975891692 0.272083759551 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628230920094 0.0996497079465 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540675450847 0.0662205650399 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897738257145 0.162205337803 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262354016199 0.0443174109184 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.3589403974 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.8541721854 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.0289183223 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.2367328918 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.42419426049 113% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 63.6247240618 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.498013245 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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