tpo 4 Endotherms are animals such as modern birds and mammals that keep their body temperatures constant. For instance, humans are endotherms and maintain an internal temperature of 37°C, no matter whether the environment is warm or cold.
The reading and lecture are both about endotherms, The author of the reading believes that dinosaurs are part of endotherms species. However, the lecturer casts doubts about the claims made in the article, saying that the her arguments are inaccurate compared to facts.
First of all, the author of the reading points out that their remains are found in polar regions. The article notes that polar dinosaurs are only animal that can sustain above their environment. The point is challenged by the lecturer. she says that polar regions today are warmer than in the past and endotherms did not live there. Furthermore, she argues that if the polar region temperature rapidly become cold then animals would migrate to a warmer area or migrate to other places. Also, their fossils would suggests that they are not endotherms.
Secondly, the author contends that the leg position and movement denotes they are enodtherm. The article establishes that their genetic make up was build for running. The lecturer rebuts this argument. she suggests that their physical make up doesn't prove that it was made for running. she elaborates on this by mentioning that their body main purpose is to support more weight and to grow more larger. In addition, scientist has no idea that endotherms can run because they have large body and they cannot withstand greater weight.
Finally, the author states that dinosaurs have structure called haversian canals. The article shows that the canal house nerves and blood vessels that maintain the species to grow rapidly. The lecturer, on the other hand, posits that it is true that they have haversian canals but the purpose of it was different because it has growth rings which thickens their bones size and they stop growing in cooler period. she puts forth the idea that dinosaurs has rapid growth and slow growth and it specific characteristic for endotherm which is growing rapidly even if it is cool.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 219, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'her'?
Suggestion: the; her
...claims made in the article, saying that the her arguments are inaccurate compared to fa...
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Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...he point is challenged by the lecturer. she says that polar regions today are warme...
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Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'suggest'
Suggestion: suggest
...other places. Also, their fossils would suggests that they are not endotherms. Second...
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Line 5, column 203, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...ing. The lecturer rebuts this argument. she suggests that their physical make up do...
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Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...he suggests that their physical make up doesnt prove that it was made for running. she...
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Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...snt prove that it was made for running. she elaborates on this by mentioning that t...
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Line 5, column 391, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'larger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: larger
...e is to support more weight and to grow more larger. In addition, scientist has no idea tha...
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Line 7, column 414, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...and they stop growing in cooler period. she puts forth the idea that dinosaurs has ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, in addition, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 12.0772626932 182% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 22.412803532 210% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1373.03311258 118% => OK
No of words: 321.0 270.72406181 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05919003115 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38307372567 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 145.348785872 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538940809969 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 419.366225166 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.1326913347 49.2860985944 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2222222222 110.228320801 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 21.698381199 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61111111111 7.06452816374 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135305157373 0.272083759551 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379143398333 0.0996497079465 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295225323236 0.0662205650399 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741191260354 0.162205337803 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322185374199 0.0443174109184 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 63.6247240618 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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