tpo 40

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tpo 40

The article states that the conditions on Venus make the human life impossible and provides three reasons of support. However, the professor explains that there is a suggestion solution for this proplem that mentioned in the reading passage by establish a station flooded on the Venus atomesphere and refutes each of the author's reasons.

First, the reading states that atmospheric pressure at Venus' surface is greater than the preassure at Earth’s surface. However, the professor this point. he states that the station will be at 50 kilometers highest aboth the Venus surface this will make the pressure on the station equall that on the Earth.

Second, the article claims that the none reservoirs of water and oxygen on Venus’ surface and the planet’s atmosphere make the life impossible as well. However, The professor counter this point by saying that this is a well known phisical proplem and can be solved by produced water and oxygen on the station by using carbon dioxide, nitrogen, and sulfuric acid which easely obtained in Venus.

Third, the reading claims that the thick clouds that fill the atmosphere reflect back the sunlight to reach the planet's surface. The professor refutes this claim by pointing out that the station will absorb this sunlight reflected by thick clouds.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, third, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1103.0 1373.03311258 80% => OK
No of words: 211.0 270.72406181 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22748815166 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54239673084 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 145.348785872 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507109004739 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 327.6 419.366225166 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3372091713 49.2860985944 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.555555556 110.228320801 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 21.698381199 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 7.06452816374 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310577605222 0.272083759551 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134903211074 0.0996497079465 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659936328529 0.0662205650399 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189419601554 0.162205337803 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537559745668 0.0443174109184 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.2367328918 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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