TPO 40
In this set of materials, the reading passages discuss that the special condition of Venus makes it impossible for the presence of humans on this plant. While in the listening, the professor casts doubt on what is presented in the text and believes that the presence of humans on Venus, not a huge challenge and as completely as possible.
First of all, in the text, it is clearly mentioned that the atmospheric pressure on Venus is about 90 times greater than this pressure on Earth and this condition will be big threaten for a human. However, the professor claims that the atmospheric pressure became lower when we become far from the plants surface so when the station located in the fifty kilometers from the plants surface that atmospheric pressure will equal to earth.
In addition, the professor disagrees with this idea that because the venus has not water and enough oxygen so the presence of space station is impossible. He says that the chemical components that present on the venus like carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid can be used to produce water and oxygen that need for the station.
Finally, in the text, it is stated that the thick layer of clouds on Venus reflect back most of the sunlight so in the lack of light presence of station is impossible. He subscribes that at the fifty kilometers from the plants surface that clouds are not very thick and also the station can be used this reflected light to produce electricity that needs for a station.
- For the successful development of a country it is more important for a government to spend money on the education of very young children five to ten years old than to spend money on universities 58
- TPO-50Scientists are considering the possibility of sending humans to Mars in the coming decades. Although there have been successful manned missions to the Moon in the 1960s and 1970s, Mars is 150 times further away from Earth than the Moon is. Thus the 3
- Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities 90
- For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. 70
- TPO 31 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'watered'.
Suggestion: watered
...his idea that because the venus has not water and enough oxygen so the presence of sp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, so, while, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.01324503311 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1373.03311258 89% => OK
No of words: 256.0 270.72406181 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78515625 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4877844873 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 145.348785872 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4765625 0.540411800872 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 375.3 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 21.2450331126 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 26.9208910514 49.2860985944 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 153.125 110.228320801 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 21.698381199 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06452816374 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354482508592 0.272083759551 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167476804828 0.0996497079465 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507274676958 0.0662205650399 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217707811632 0.162205337803 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385225404821 0.0443174109184 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.3589403974 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 53.8541721854 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.0289183223 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 63.6247240618 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.498013245 141% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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