TPO 41

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of all, the reading passage claims that regulation exist. On the other hand, the...
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Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that for example, require company to use liner are not sufficient , because liner...
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Line 1, column 195, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...company to use liner are not sufficient , because liner used when only new landf...
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Line 1, column 226, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ufficient , because liner used when only new landfill and new pound that it is no...
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Line 1, column 303, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'added'.
Suggestion: added
...is not sufficient and companies are not add liner. it is Several Significant damage...
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Line 1, column 314, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...icient and companies are not add liner. it is Several Significant damage, the har...
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Line 1, column 347, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...liner. it is Several Significant damage, the harmful chemical from coal ash leake...
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Line 1, column 394, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...armful chemical from coal ash leaked the ground water and contaminated drinking...
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Line 1, column 408, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l from coal ash leaked the ground water and contaminated drinking water. ...
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Line 1, column 426, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aked the ground water and contaminated drinking water. Second, the...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and contaminated drinking water. Second, the text suggest that concern a...
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Line 9, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ted drinking water. Second, the text suggest that concern about recy...
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Line 9, column 211, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Customer
...nd handling coal ash is not essential. customer stop recycle rules product. other damag...
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Line 9, column 248, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Other
.... customer stop recycle rules product. other damage like mercury, mercury is a fair...
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Line 9, column 260, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...stop recycle rules product. other damage like mercury, mercury is a fairly materi...
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Line 9, column 304, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ke mercury, mercury is a fairly material that storing rules and handling recycle ...
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Line 9, column 369, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...handling recycle is long time and safely recycle 5o years. So, unlikely customers...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly customers buy recycle coal ash. Third, the passage suggested that incre...
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Line 17, column 29, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Third, the passage suggested that increased cost, in contrast, the pr...
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Line 17, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... refutes this statement and she explains that according to analyses power compan...
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Line 17, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es this statement and she explains that according to analyses power companies h...
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Line 17, column 139, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'analyse'.
Suggestion: analyse
...nt and she explains that according to analyses power companies have revenue about 50 ...
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Line 17, column 163, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t according to analyses power companies have revenue about 50 million dollar tha...
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Line 17, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and increase the price electricity bill is only 1 percent that not big price
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Line 17, column 288, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...electricity bill is only 1 percent that not big price
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, third, for example, in contrast, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 30.3222958057 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 1373.03311258 72% => OK
No of words: 190.0 270.72406181 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23157894737 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.04702891845 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45783498729 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636842105263 0.540411800872 118% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 419.366225166 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.1503526852 49.2860985944 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.25 110.228320801 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 21.698381199 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.875 7.06452816374 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 4.19205298013 596% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445328580847 0.272083759551 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170691090216 0.0996497079465 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095879660251 0.0662205650399 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24614723965 0.162205337803 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121582685899 0.0443174109184 274% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.3589403974 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.2367328918 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:

para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3

Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).

Don't need a conclusion paragraph.

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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