According to the given set of the reading passage, it is the author's conviction that the power companies do not required to dispose of coal ash, which is a detrimental chemical for the environment, owing to the several highlighted reasons. However, the lecturer casts doubt on this justification and refutes each of the author's specific point by providing some counter-arguments that are as follows:
First of all, the reading holds the view that the regulations are existed. On the contrary, the lecturer asserts that the liner, which used by companies in order to prevent the soil contamination is not sufficient. In other words, the companies add the liner for just new established landfills. While all landfills require this special material. For instance, some ponds have encountered several damages such as pollution of water.
Secondly, although the author posits that disposing coal ash will have a bad influence on recycled products and as a result, people will not buy the products, the lecture finds this reason unconvincing by exemplifying the Mercury, which is required a very special storing and handling, have recycled safely and have not created any significant concern on people. Hence, these new regulations will not effect on these products as well.
As the last point to emphasize the reading claim, the author says that new strikes will lead to a huge increase in the costs of the company and the price of electricity will be intensified subsequently. Yet again. the lecturer stated on the opposite side and contradicts that it is true that the company will be faced with a high cost problem virtually 15 billion dollars, But mathematical analysis shows the household electricity will be increased merely 1 percent, which is not a big price for the general public.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The government and corporation should share all their scientific discoveries with other countries in the world Please use specific details and examples to support your opinion 77
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- TPO-44 - Integrated Writing Task In 1957 a European silver coin dating to the eleventh century was discovered at a Native American archaeological site in the state of Maine in the United States. Many people believed the coin had been originally brought to 80
- TPO-25 - Integrated Writing Task In 1938 an archaeologist in Iraq acquired a set of clay jars that had been excavated two years earlier by villagers constructing a railroad line. The vessel was about 2,200 years old. Each clay jay contained a copper cylin 76
- TPO-24 - Integrated Writing Task Animal fossils usually provide very little opportunity to study the actual animal tissues, because in fossils the animals' living tissues have been largely replaced by minerals. Thus, scientists were very excited recently 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...n set of the reading passage, it is the authors conviction that the power companies do ...
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Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ner for just new established landfills. While all landfills require this special mate...
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Line 5, column 402, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
.... Hence, these new regulations will not effect on these products as well. As the la...
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Line 7, column 215, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...be intensified subsequently. Yet again. the lecturer stated on the opposite side an...
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Line 7, column 501, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...rcent, which is not a big price for the general public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, such as, as a result, first of all, in other words, it is true, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1373.03311258 110% => OK
No of words: 292.0 270.72406181 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15410958904 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90235432546 2.5805825403 112% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 145.348785872 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565068493151 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 419.366225166 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 21.2450331126 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.605434928 49.2860985944 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 150.5 110.228320801 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2 21.698381199 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.0 7.06452816374 226% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328028597503 0.272083759551 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10483746187 0.0996497079465 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071015860826 0.0662205650399 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181461469626 0.162205337803 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415490151807 0.0443174109184 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.3589403974 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 53.8541721854 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.0289183223 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.42419426049 113% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 63.6247240618 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.7273730684 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.498013245 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.