The reading passage claims that thee are many solution that millions of birds can recognize glass and open air so with this solution they do not try through glass windows. However, the lecture casts serious doubt on this claim by presenting some counter arguments and examples. He believes that this solution does not effective for solve this problem and it can not stop bird.
Firstly, he argues that regular , clear glass with one way is not true. In addition in outside has reflect mirror and this is bad. bird can understand mirror. It reflects that it is design. This, however, is contrast to the passage claims that one solution is to replace the regular, clear glass with one-way glass that is transparent is only one direction. The occupants of the building can see out, but birds and others cannot see in. they understand it is barrier and obstacle.
Moreover, it is noted in the reading passage that a second solution is to paint colorful with straight lines or other design on regular window glass. for example a window could have a design of thin strips painted over the glass. In contrast the lecture clearly states that paints in the glass have many problem due to some many place in design it is open so while birds arrive this situation. They try to fly throw them in space. this design have negative effect for people inside inn this glass can be dark.
Finally, the speakers points out that magnetic field to guide birds help them for navigate but in the winter and cold day sense is different. this ability in the inside city have more effect. Nevertheless, the text asserts that the third solution to create an artificial field to guide birds away from building. human use instrument called a magnetic compress determine directions. this natural ability to sense earth's magnetic fields: this ability works just like compress and it helps birds navigate in right direction when they fly. in contrast a bird flight path can be equipped with powerful electromagnets that emit magnetic signals that steer birds in a direction away from the building.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 42, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun solution seems to be countable; consider using: 'many solutions'.
Suggestion: many solutions
...he reading passage claims that thee are many solution that millions of birds can recognize gl...
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Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... bird. Firstly, he argues that regular , clear glass with one way is not true. I...
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Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...lear glass with one way is not true. In addition in outside has reflect mirror and this ...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'reflected'.
Suggestion: reflected
...is not true. In addition in outside has reflect mirror and this is bad. bird can unders...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Bird
...ide has reflect mirror and this is bad. bird can understand mirror. It reflects that...
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Line 4, column 151, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...r other design on regular window glass. for example a window could have a design of...
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Line 4, column 234, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
... thin strips painted over the glass. In contrast the lecture clearly states that paints ...
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Line 4, column 325, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun place seems to be countable; consider using: 'many places'.
Suggestion: many places
...the glass have many problem due to some many place in design it is open so while birds arr...
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Line 4, column 432, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...n. They try to fly throw them in space. this design have negative effect for people ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 143, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...winter and cold day sense is different. this ability in the inside city have more ef...
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Line 5, column 313, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Human
...ield to guide birds away from building. human use instrument called a magnetic compre...
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Line 5, column 383, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...magnetic compress determine directions. this natural ability to sense earths magneti...
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Line 5, column 537, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...igate in right direction when they fly. in contrast a bird flight path can be equi...
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Line 5, column 540, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...te in right direction when they fly. in contrast a bird flight path can be equipped with...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, third, while, for example, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 22.412803532 178% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.01324503311 239% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1373.03311258 125% => OK
No of words: 354.0 270.72406181 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84745762712 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35590652961 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 145.348785872 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516949152542 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 419.366225166 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 13.0662251656 161% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.3704994332 49.2860985944 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7142857143 110.228320801 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.19047619048 7.06452816374 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 4.19205298013 334% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.633782243118 0.272083759551 233% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173328600844 0.0996497079465 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972054483544 0.0662205650399 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.369927072817 0.162205337803 228% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551577544364 0.0443174109184 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.3589403974 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.42419426049 88% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 63.6247240618 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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