he reading and the lecture are both about harm can caused by glass to flying birds.the author believes that there are many solutions can be used to lessen these possible bird injurious lecturer casts doubt on the claims made in the article.he thinks that mentioned solutions are impractical.
first of all,the author points out that by using one-way transparent glass ,the birds will fly in an distant direction from it.it is mentioned that people inside can see but those in the other direction will not and so are birds ,they will avoid to fly through it.this point is challenged by the lecturer.he says that this glass can works as a mirror.furthermore,he argues that this mirror will reflect the trees and the sky,the bird might think they are real and fly through the glass and wound itself.
secondly,the author contends that if we use colorful lines in specific patterns normal window glass,birds will be able to see through the holes were there is no paint the article notes that birds will stay away of this colored lined glass.the lecturer rebuts this argument.he suggests that birds will perceive this lines as small open holes ,he elaborates on this by mentioning that they will fly through it.they do not distinguish between real holes or fake hole.
finally,the author states that onset of an artificial magnetic field lead birds away from building,the article establishes that birds usually uses earth's magnetic field to guide their way.the lecturer, on the other hand,posits that the magnetic field leading method is used by birds only in migration,when they migrate from cold places to warmer ones,he put forth the idea that birds uses their eyes and follows light to travel between short distances like cities and buildings.
- A recent study reveals that people especially young people are reading far less literature novels plays and poems than they used to This is troubling because the trend has unfortunate effects for the reading public for culture in general and for the futur 76
- TPO-42 - Integrated Writing Task Glass is a favored building material for modern architecture, yet it is also very dangerous for wild birds. Because they often cannot distinguish between glass and open air, millions of birds are harmed every year when the 80
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. 76
- A recent study reveals that people especially young people are reading far less literature novels plays and poems than they used to This is troubling because the trend has unfortunate effects for the reading public for culture in general and for the futur 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 5.04856512141 257% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 22.412803532 192% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1373.03311258 106% => OK
No of words: 288.0 270.72406181 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0625 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59774207513 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 145.348785872 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 419.366225166 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 3.25607064018 338% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 13.0662251656 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 21.2450331126 339% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.8670823387 49.2860985944 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 364.5 110.228320801 331% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.0 21.698381199 332% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.75 7.06452816374 322% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 4.19205298013 501% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.462247214945 0.272083759551 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.274963489183 0.0996497079465 276% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711678803612 0.0662205650399 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274963489183 0.162205337803 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711678803612 0.0443174109184 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.4 13.3589403974 287% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.86 53.8541721854 13% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.2 11.0289183223 274% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.25 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.88 8.42419426049 129% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 63.6247240618 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 10.7273730684 242% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.498013245 293% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.2008830022 277% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.