The reading and the lecturer are both about the silver coin that has found in archealeogical site in Maine. The author of reading believes that this silver can not be real because of some reasons so, brought there by someone who wants to deceive a public. The lecturer cast doubts on the claims made in the article. She thinks that the silver coin might be real. This idea is supported by some archealogist with three reasons.
Fisrt of all, the author points out that Norses did not settle down in near location to Maine side. The remains of their settlement was found in North America location which is too far distance from Maine. This point challenged by lecturer.She says that Norse people could have reached to Maine as they were travellers.
Secondly, the author contends that there is no other coins found in Maine side. the article notes that the Norse did not bring any coins to North America. The lecturer rebuts this arguement. She suggest that the Norse might travelled to the Europe and they might not leave any coins behind them back.
Finally, the author states that the silver coin was not known as a money by the Norse. Thus, they thought that the silver coin was not worth to use. The lecturer, on the other hand, posits that the Norse would not have seen the silver coin was a money but they valued these objects as a precious things and use them as a neckless or decorative tools. She puts forth the idea that as they were interested in invaluable materials, silver coins must have been used as a trade goods.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 257, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... someone who wants to deceive a public. The lecturer cast doubts on the claims made...
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Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: She
...aine. This point challenged by lecturer.She says that Norse people could have reach...
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Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... is no other coins found in Maine side. the article notes that the Norse did not br...
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Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'suggests'.
Suggestion: suggests
...The lecturer rebuts this arguement. She suggest that the Norse might travelled to the E...
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Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Norse might travelled to the Europe and they might not leave any coins behind th...
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Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t not leave any coins behind them back. Finally, the author states that the silv...
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Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'money'.
Suggestion: money
...s that the silver coin was not known as a money by the Norse. Thus, they thought that t...
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Line 7, column 474, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'good'?
Suggestion: good
...er coins must have been used as a trade goods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, second, secondly, so, thus, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1373.03311258 92% => OK
No of words: 274.0 270.72406181 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6204379562 5.08290768461 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19396194545 2.5805825403 85% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529197080292 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.380949639 49.2860985944 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.125 110.228320801 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 21.698381199 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 7.06452816374 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.491929864514 0.272083759551 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154742271581 0.0996497079465 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812314876594 0.0662205650399 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276354632888 0.162205337803 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617910282846 0.0443174109184 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.3589403974 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 53.8541721854 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 12.2367328918 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.42419426049 80% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 63.6247240618 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.