Tpo 45 Integrated writing

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Tpo-45 Integrated writing

Recently, there has been a ton debate as to predict insects million years ago . More specifically, in regards to the passages, the
wrier puts forth the idea that the discovery of fossil structure that resemble bee nest do not provide solid evidence that bee were
existed 200 million years ago. In the listening, the lecturer is quick to point out there are some serious flaws in the writer's
claim and adresses, in detail, the each point made in the reading text.
First and foremost, the author of the reading states that lack of fossil remains directly indicates thare was not any existense of
bees 200 million years ago. The professor in the same field stand in frim opposion to this claim. The professor, for example,
states that remains of bees might be could not have preserved due to the fact the certain tree raisin -helps to fossilize- was not
exist at a time.
A group of scholars, represented by the writer, think that absence flowering plants- bees biologically depend on to survive implies that bee were not appeared at that time. In the lecture, the speaker specifically adresses the point when she claimed that
bees could have depended on non-flowering plants like pines. She goes on to say that it might have adapted to feeding on
non-flowering plants later.
Finally, the author wraps his idea by positing that the fossils found in Arizona dispense with the particular detail of modern
bees' nest chamber such as caps- a spiral pattern closes a bees' nest. Again, the lecturer ,nevertheless, finds issue with the claim
by contending that despite lacking of caps, the fossilized structures have the specific chemical materials produced by
contemperory bees to protect its nests from water.

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