The reading and lecture both are discussed about pterosaurs is powerful flighter or not. While the reading states that pterosaurs are not capable to fly and provides three reasons of support. However, the lecture states that recent research showed that pterosaurs is a good flighter and refutes each of the reading points.
First of all, the reading passage states that pterosaurs is a reptiles and cold-blooded animal. Cool-blooded animal are not able to produce enough amount of energy that help them to fly. all modern animal who are able to fly all are warm-blooded animal. However, the lecture argues that pterosaurs body have hear like element that make body warmer. This body hear help them to make body warmer to fly.
In addition, the reading make the argument that weight of pterosaurs is very heavy so it not able to flap their wings fast that make them powerful flight. However, the lecture counter this point by stating that there boon are hollow and very light weight, that help them to fly smoothly. Furthermore,this hollow boons make there body light . So pterosaurs can able to fly very first.
Finally, the reading passage claims that pterosaurs are not a power flight because there back legs are small and weak that not able to take off from ground. All animal run and jump to get enough speed to fly. The lecture refutes this claim by pointing out that pterosaurs are used different technique to fly, they are used four legs to fly that help them to take off.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: All
...amount of energy that help them to fly. all modern animal who are able to fly all a...
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Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'heard'.
Suggestion: heard
...ecture argues that pterosaurs body have hear like element that make body warmer. Thi...
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Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: LIGHT_WEIGHT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lightweight'?
Suggestion: lightweight
...ing that there boon are hollow and very light weight, that help them to fly smoothly. Furthe...
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Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , this
...t help them to fly smoothly. Furthermore,this hollow boons make there body light . So...
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Line 5, column 340, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...,this hollow boons make there body light . So pterosaurs can able to fly very firs...
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Line 7, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...terosaurs are not a power flight because there back legs are small and weak that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, while, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1373.03311258 90% => OK
No of words: 255.0 270.72406181 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8431372549 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36131116232 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470588235294 0.540411800872 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 375.3 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3460996232 49.2860985944 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3333333333 110.228320801 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06452816374 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291517743108 0.272083759551 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11306873723 0.0996497079465 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738089628857 0.0662205650399 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183429047166 0.162205337803 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056081718868 0.0443174109184 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.3589403974 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 8.42419426049 80% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 63.6247240618 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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