The reading claims that frog populations is declining and propose three methods to solve the problem. However, the professor explains that these methods are not practical solution and find all methods with problem.
The author states that pesticides are harming frogs and law can prohibit the farmers to use. The lecturer bring up the idea that it is not economical. He states that farmer are depend on pesticides and if this law prohibit some special areas, their farmer will faced sever disadvantages and lose the market to other farmers from other areas because their yield will decrease.
Furthermore, the reading passage argues that frogs are sensitive to fungus and it can be solve by applying antifungal medication. While the professor dismisses this method because first frogs should be capture and medication apply individually to every frog and it not possible. According to professor, this medication should apply to every generation again and again and this is so expensive.
Finally, the article poses that, frogs lay their eggs in water and they are threat by human’s activities. Water habitats like lakes and marshes should be protect from excessive water use. Conversely, the professor states that this will not save frog population due to the fact that global warming is increasing and cause waters to disappear.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...t economical. He states that farmer are depend on pesticides and if this law prohibit ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'face'
Suggestion: face
...t some special areas, their farmer will faced sever disadvantages and lose the market...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 203, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'captured'?
Suggestion: captured
...is method because first frogs should be capture and medication apply individually to ev...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 161, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'protected'?
Suggestion: protected
...bitats like lakes and marshes should be protect from excessive water use. Conversely, t...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 349, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...creasing and cause waters to disappear.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 30.3222958057 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 1373.03311258 83% => OK
No of words: 214.0 270.72406181 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29906542056 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6166555354 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560747663551 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 419.366225166 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2168741478 49.2860985944 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.090909091 110.228320801 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 21.698381199 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.06452816374 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384533542308 0.272083759551 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147649800399 0.0996497079465 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914724172023 0.0662205650399 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21606512636 0.162205337803 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750642704307 0.0443174109184 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.2367328918 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.