The reading passage and the lecture discussing about how to protect the frog population from it is extinction but in contrast way.
First of all, the reading passage says that frog species is declining due to use pesticide by means of it chemical causing the problem to nervous system and eventually it kills the frog, so this can be prevented by using by strict regulation for using pesticide in certain area where the frog species are more but the professor refutes this point by stating that if they following strict regulation for using pesticide the crop failure will that leads great economical to former as well as entire nation.
Secondly, the reading passage claims that fungus important causes for the decline of the frog species and if the treating with anti fungal treatment then we prevent the declining the frog population because fungus causes infection to skin and that leads to death. Again professor contrast this point by stating that if we want treat the fungal function the we must treat each frog individually not as a group and more over we treat the off spring that frog separately that highly impossible to do that.
Thirdly, reading passage suggests that human activities another important factor for declining of the frog species, if human being maintain the wet land and drains then the frog population may not decline like maintaining lake ans marshes. But the speaker oppose this point whatever damages happen to the wet land not only because of human activities but also because of global warming.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...pecies is declining due to use pesticide by means of it chemical causing the prob...
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...og species and if the treating with anti fungal treatment then we prevent the dec...
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...revent the declining the frog population because fungus causes infection to skin ...
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...at if we want treat the fungal function the we must treat each frog individually not a...
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... and drains then the frog population may not decline like maintaining lake ans ma...
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... but also because of global warming.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'well', 'in contrast', 'as well as', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238805970149 0.261695866417 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.149253731343 0.158904122519 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.108208955224 0.0723426182421 150% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0634328358209 0.0435111971325 146% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0298507462687 0.0277247811725 108% => OK
Prepositions: 0.14552238806 0.128828473217 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0559701492537 0.0370669169778 151% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.43595305381 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0298507462687 0.0208969081088 143% => OK
Particles: 0.00373134328358 0.00154638098197 241% => OK
Determiners: 0.123134328358 0.128158765124 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0149253731343 0.0158828679856 94% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0149253731343 0.0114777025283 130% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1551.0 1645.83664459 94% => OK
No of words: 257.0 271.125827815 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.03501945525 6.08160592843 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.04852973271 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.36186770428 0.374372842146 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.284046692607 0.287516216867 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.163424124514 0.187439937562 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.11673151751 0.113142543107 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43595305381 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 145.348785872 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525291828794 0.539623497131 97% => OK
Word variations: 50.5525910909 53.8517498576 94% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0529801325 46% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 42.8333333333 21.7502111507 197% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 121.069424528 49.3711431718 245% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 258.5 132.220823453 196% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.8333333333 21.7502111507 197% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.5 0.878197800319 285% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.39072847682 177% => OK
Readability: 71.238002594 50.5018328374 141% => OK
Elegance: 1.81538461538 1.90840788429 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.462481386584 0.549887131256 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.239541220371 0.142949733639 168% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0469143698394 0.0787303798458 60% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.852514959873 0.631733273073 135% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.1109860922 0.139662658121 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.287025937103 0.266732575781 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888687490498 0.103435571967 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.382756505011 0.414875509568 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0559971293112 0.0530846634433 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.3320403499 0.40443939384 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400787149255 0.0528353158467 76% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.26048565121 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.49668874172 86% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.62251655629 83% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.1766004415 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 10.2958057395 58% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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