The colleges and universities are basic fundamental places for the students, it's goal are to teach the students about the knowledge, skills, good education,sports activities, developing communication skill, improving the student's scientific skills and making them good moral people and so on. So these two places are not teach subject but it concentrate on student's sports activities. Therefore whether it is college or universities, it should give equal important for sports as well as education.
Firstly, health is wealth so in order to be healthy person everyone one of us must do physical activities like walking, running, cycling, swimming and other games etc. So sports and the education are like our two eyes, we can't say that my right eye is better than left like that sports and education are like eyes. So colleges and university should give equal important to these two main activities.
Secondly, even certain government sector like education, factory and other government entities are giving more preparation to sports persons. For example one my relative is very good in all sports and athlete but he is not that much good in education , because of his sports talent he got general manager job in government steel company in India.
Thirdly, government and private medical colleges they have special sports quotas for sports, if a student very good in sports he easily get this kind opportunities. And sports not only improve one's physical strength but improve mind and body in balance manner. So these kind sports activities college should encourage and it should equal financial support.
Finally, if person is good in both sports and the education, then he can shine his life without any doubt. No matter how much your good i maths , science, history, sociology and physics without sport activities your life is incomplete. You received so many awards but not participate in sports then you lost fun and your youth
To sum up, each sector has it's own identity and strength, so we can't compare one thing better than other. So in order to get benefits of both sports and the education. College or universities must spend money equally for both sports and education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , sports
...ut the knowledge, skills, good education,sports activities, developing communication sk...
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Line 1, column 322, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'taught'.
Suggestion: taught
... and so on. So these two places are not teach subject but it concentrate on students ...
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Line 1, column 343, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'concentrates'?
Suggestion: concentrates
...two places are not teach subject but it concentrate on students sports activities. Therefor...
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Line 1, column 386, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...centrate on students sports activities. Therefore whether it is college or universities, ...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...the education are like our two eyes, we cant say that my right eye is better than l...
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Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...education are like our two eyes, we cant say that my right eye is better than lef...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ut he is not that much good in education , because of his sports talent he got gen...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...a student very good in sports he easily get this kind opportunities. And sports not...
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Suggestion:
...gth but improve mind and body in balance manner. So these kind sports activities ...
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...ny doubt. No matter how much your good i maths , science, history, sociology and ...
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... science, history, sociology and physics without sport activities your life is in...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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... equally for both sports and education.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'third', 'thirdly', 'well', 'as for', 'for example', 'as well as', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.295 0.229887763892 128% => OK
Verbs: 0.1125 0.158761421928 71% => OK
Adjectives: 0.095 0.0866891130778 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.065 0.046263068375 141% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0625 0.0685040099705 91% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0975 0.118717715034 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0175 0.0351676179071 50% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.71380222067 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.015 0.0309702414327 48% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0025 0.00188951952338 132% => OK
Determiners: 0.0525 0.0887237588012 59% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0175 0.0209618222197 83% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0025 0.0139019557991 18% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2212.0 2387.08602151 93% => OK
No of words: 361.0 408.028673835 88% => OK
Chars per words: 6.12742382271 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.387811634349 0.338922669872 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.271468144044 0.251872472559 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.191135734072 0.174417080927 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.119113573407 0.112833075102 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71380222067 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542936288089 0.524397521467 104% => OK
Word variations: 59.6755999018 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 22.5625 20.5533526081 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8825201072 48.84282405 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.25 120.699889404 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5625 20.5533526081 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0625 0.644075263715 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.54480286738 271% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 49.7093144044 45.7405998639 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.70833333333 1.45489161554 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370689145084 0.300154397459 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.112207519352 0.103427244359 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0793558751826 0.0752933317313 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.579072738861 0.497263757937 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.111711713123 0.151897553556 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157103337006 0.114077575197 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641554159108 0.0781384742642 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.256533729316 0.336927656856 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0401828970564 0.067059652881 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221717129102 0.210909579961 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066867901484 0.0618886996521 108% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.