In the reading, the author claims that humpback whales migrate and they use stars for navigation by pointing out 3 reasons of support. However, finding all the ideas questionable and implausible, the lecturer totally repudiates the claim and presents some evidence to the contrary.
At first, the author argues that so intelligent are humpback whales that they can use stars for navigation. Conversely, the lecturer brings up the idea that there is no connection between intelligence and navigation. Birds and ducks navigate their route, however they are not intelligent. And this behavior is instinctive for animals.
In addition, the reading passage holds the view that humpback whales migrate in straight lines due to the existence some external objects and forces like stars for humpback whales. On the other hand, the lecture disputes this point by clarifying the fact that there is a bio magnetic power in the brain of whales which is sensitive to earth magnetic field.
Finally, the author asserts spy-hopping that is a behavior in which humpback whales look upward when their head is above the water and an explanation for this behavior is that they are looking at the stars for navigating. The lecturer, though, dismisses it by pointing out that besides humpback whales, sharks do this behavior although they do not migrate, and states that they do that just for haunting animals. Also, they do this in day when there is no star.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...oute, however they are not intelligent. and this behavior is instinctive for animal...
^^^
Line 7, column 414, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...they do that just for haunting animals. also they do this in day when there is no st...
^^^^
Line 7, column 414, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: also,
...they do that just for haunting animals. also they do this in day when there is no st...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, conversely, finally, first, however, if, look, so, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 1373.03311258 88% => OK
No of words: 237.0 270.72406181 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11392405063 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63239067663 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535864978903 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 419.366225166 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6349773652 49.2860985944 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.181818182 110.228320801 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5454545455 21.698381199 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.06452816374 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.450863750811 0.272083759551 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175903827319 0.0996497079465 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118515572832 0.0662205650399 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273929702624 0.162205337803 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045022415951 0.0443174109184 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.