In the reading, the author claims that there are many animals that migrate for feeding and mating purposes and about humpback whales, we know how they do it by using navigation ability by pointing out 3 reasons of supporting. However, finding all the ideas questionable and implausible, the lecturer totally repudiates this claim and presents some evidence to the contrary.
At first, the author argues that so intelligent are humpback whales that they can use stars to navigate by. it suggests that they brain have special power in comparison to other animals. Conversely the lecturer brings up the idea that ther are any relations between inteligency and using starts for novigation since there are a lot of animal for example dogs or birds which are not intelligent but they can use start for navigation since they born with this feature.
In addition, the reading passage holds the view that humpback whales migrate in straight lines although they can't use some external objects or forces. On the other hand, the lecturer disputes this point by clarifying the fact that many of animals move in straight direct but they use magnitide fields. that being said that they can't use moving straight without any external forces.
Finally, the author asserts special unusual behavior of humpback whales that known as a spy-hopping as the last point for supporting their ability to use stars to navigate by. The lecturer, though, dismisses it by elucidating that there are a plethora of animals which have spy-hopping behavior. a good example of them is shark that use this behavior to look for animals to haunt them. This is show that this behavior not a reason for see a
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Conversely,
...l power in comparison to other animals. Conversely the lecturer brings up the idea that th...
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Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...migrate in straight lines although they cant use some external objects or forces. On...
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Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...t direct but they use magnitide fields. that being said that they cant use moving st...
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Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...itide fields. that being said that they cant use moving straight without any externa...
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Line 7, column 297, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: A
...nimals which have spy-hopping behavior. a good example of them is shark that use ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, first, however, if, look, so, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 22.412803532 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1373.03311258 102% => OK
No of words: 280.0 270.72406181 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98571428571 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52068989585 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 145.348785872 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528571428571 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 419.366225166 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6143398556 49.2860985944 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.333333333 110.228320801 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 21.698381199 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06452816374 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.491083136439 0.272083759551 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182182341475 0.0996497079465 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792569590478 0.0662205650399 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290048390823 0.162205337803 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617497030041 0.0443174109184 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.