TPO 51 Writing Integrated
Humans have long been fascinated by elephants, the largest land animal in the modern world. Social animals that live in herds, elephants are native to both Africa and Asia. Their large ears, long trunk, and long life span have made elephants one of the most captivating creatures on Earth. Our long-standing interest in elephants has led to several beliefs about surprising elephant behaviors.
The reading passage discusses several fascinating facts about elephants' behaviors. However, the lecturer finds the ideas dubious and casts doubt on the reasons provided by the reading.
First, the author claims that according to some behaviors such as breaking away from their herds, old elephants can realize that their death is approaching. Conversely, the lecturer brings up the idea that the fact that elephants break away from their herds is not merely due to the fact that their death is near. The practical reason for this issue is that old elephants have difficulty chewing plants. As a result, they leave their herds in search of softer plants which are typically found near lakes. Since they spend the rest of their life there, they would die there as well.
Furthermore, the reading holds the view that elephants have a special ability to paint drawings representing the world around them. On the contrary, the professor underlines the fact that although these animals are able to hold a paintbrush on their trunk, they move the brush not just because they have a special talent. In fact, the brush movement is the response to the stimulation of people who touch their ears with certain patterns and try to train them. Therefore, their paintings are just some response to human's encouraging and the drawings are just some lines rather than drawings of objects like flowers.
Finally, the passage asserts that elephants are afraid of mice which is confirmed by recent scientific research. In contrast, the speaker dismisses the issue due to the fact that the reason explaining elephants' fear is not because of the size of mice. Their fear is related to the fact that they are not familiar with mice when they first observe them. To illustrate, in zoos elephants are not afraid of mice at all since they have frequently seen them and they know that they cause no harm to them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, in contrast, in fact, such as, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 22.412803532 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1373.03311258 115% => OK
No of words: 319.0 270.72406181 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94670846395 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40687850555 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 145.348785872 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526645768025 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 419.366225166 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8451810413 49.2860985944 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.2 110.228320801 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 21.698381199 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06452816374 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 4.45695364238 202% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122659550852 0.272083759551 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446914479343 0.0996497079465 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300029733747 0.0662205650399 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.071764426483 0.162205337803 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029798469073 0.0443174109184 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 53.8541721854 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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