Both the passage and the lecture discuss living on asteroids. The reading proposes three reasons that living on them will be a good idea. On the other hand, the professor states that those reasons are impractical and opposes each one.
First, the passage indicates that because those asteroids are smaller than Moon or Mars, they have lower gravity. As a result, it is safer to land on them. Also, spaceships can carry more equipment there and need less fuel. Nevertheless, the professor denies this view and illustrates that low gravity will have certain risks. He explains that people lose muscle structure, and their bone density gets damaged. Astronauts who live in low-gravity places for a few months suffer those problems, so colonists who will live for many years will be severely damaged.
Second, the reading claims that asteroids contain a significant amount of rare and expensive materials, such as gold and platinum. Colonists and businesses can use those materials to pay and support such a trip. Nonetheless, the lecturer rejects this idea and states that the cost of mining and transporting those materials to earth will decrease the profit. Also, if they have quite a lot of those rare materials, the market price will decrease. Therefore, they cannot make too much money out of them.
Finally, the author states that some of those asteroids come close to the earth, much closer than Moon or Mars, which will make it easier to get there and come back. However, the speaker refutes it, saying that getting there may be easy, but the return will be difficult. He says that some of those asteroids orbit unusually. They may get close to the earth, but they do not stay and move far away from our planet. As a result, getting back from there will be much challenging.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, so, therefore, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 5.04856512141 297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 7.30242825607 233% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 22.412803532 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1373.03311258 108% => OK
No of words: 303.0 270.72406181 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88448844884 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43289621184 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 145.348785872 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574257425743 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 419.366225166 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1750423263 49.2860985944 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8947368421 110.228320801 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9473684211 21.698381199 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05263157895 7.06452816374 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323616254852 0.272083759551 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962325092471 0.0996497079465 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664086460659 0.0662205650399 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184164209024 0.162205337803 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830843456875 0.0443174109184 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.3589403974 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.8541721854 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.0289183223 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.2367328918 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 63.6247240618 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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