The article and the lecture are contradicting each other, in terms of the desalination project in order to reduce salt proportion in the Salton sea lake. More specifically, the penman of the article provides three theories to prove that possibility of desalination from lake water is desirable. However, the lecturer negates the arguments presented in the passage and provides some evidence to refute them.
According to the article, the first dispute focuses on the fact that saltwater can be eliminated through a desalination system in which the lake’s water converts into the steam by heating process, and lateron, when it is cool down, the freshwater could be restored. besides, in this whole process, salt and other materials are left behind. Nonetheless, the speaker rebutes this stating that even though fresh water can be obtained through the process, materials which stay back with salt could have detrimental effect on human health. Thus, this idea is not acceptable.
Moreover, another point of debate highlights that combining ocean water with the lack water to reduce salinity. Nevertheless, the lecturer negates this by asserting that the nearest ocean spot is distant enough from the lake, and therefore, constructing pipelines or canals requires a significant amount of resources for the local government.
Finally, the last text exaplains that salinity can be evidently reduced by building wall and separating lake into many devisions. On the contrary, the professor undermines this point and describes that constructed wall could be easily deteriorated by geological activities such as a major earthquick which leads to mixing up water in the lake again. Thus, this step in illogical according to the lecturer.
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- TPO 43 integrated writing 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Besides
...down, the freshwater could be restored. besides, in this whole process, salt and other ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1373.03311258 107% => OK
No of words: 271.0 270.72406181 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42804428044 5.08290768461 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85026628916 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 145.348785872 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59778597786 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 419.366225166 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.6419413859 49.2860985944 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.583333333 110.228320801 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 21.698381199 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 7.06452816374 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410961406456 0.272083759551 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129552270315 0.0996497079465 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837059573978 0.0662205650399 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233507672701 0.162205337803 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270038336169 0.0443174109184 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.3589403974 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.8541721854 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.0289183223 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.2367328918 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.42419426049 117% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 63.6247240618 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.7273730684 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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