TPO 8 the Chevalier s memoir accuracy
The reading claims that the accuracy of memoir writtend by the Chevalier is not right and he inevts many events in it. Nevertheless, the professor cast dount on it and believe that the memoir are pretty accurat and reliable for historyan,.
First, the reading states that the Chevalier was not wealthy because he borrowed considerable sums of money from a Swiss merchant. However, the speaker states that borrowing money does not mean the Chevalier was poor. He has a lot of assess which sold it and use its money for parties and gambling. Therefore, the Chevalier was waiting for his money to arrive when he borrowed money.
Second, according to the lecture, the Chevalier completed his memoir after many years that he meets Voltairs. Hence, it is not possible to remember all the conversation accurately. In contrast, the lecturer explains that the Chevalier after meeting Voltaire wrote what he remembered about their conversation at each night. Moreover, some witnesses exist which say he consult with others and kept writing for many years.
Third, based on the passage, critics believe that escap from jail is just for making his reading more enjoyable and Since the Chevalier had a lot of politically well-connected friend, he was able to bribe the jailer and escape the prison. On the contrary, the speaker assests that many other prisons have more powerful friends than the Chevalier but they could not escape the prison. Also, the ceiling of the Chevalier was repaired after his escape and because of that we can accept he escape from ceiling.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site. 76
- TPO 3 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. 73
- tpo 33 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...retty accurat and reliable for historyan,. First, the reading states that the Che...
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Line 3, column 367, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'consults'.
Suggestion: consults
...over, some witnesses exist which say he consult with others and kept writing for many y...
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Line 4, column 486, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'escapes'.
Suggestion: escapes
...pe and because of that we can accept he escape from ceiling.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, third, well, in contrast, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1373.03311258 95% => OK
No of words: 259.0 270.72406181 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01158301158 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55817657292 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 145.348785872 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555984555985 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 419.366225166 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3807547527 49.2860985944 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8461538462 110.228320801 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 21.698381199 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06452816374 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19568434894 0.272083759551 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786890753888 0.0996497079465 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759998922665 0.0662205650399 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136081084524 0.162205337803 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790150591817 0.0443174109184 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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