TPO 8 the Chevalier s memoir accuracy
The reading specifies that accuracy of memoir writtend by the Chevalier is skeptical since plenty critics claims he distorts many events to make his life more exciting. Nevertheless, the professor casts doubt on it and believes that the memoir is a pretty accurate and reliable source.
First, the reading states that the Chevalier was not wealthy because he borrowed considerable sums of money from a Swiss merchant. However, the speaker states that the Chevalier who borrowed a great deal of money, was not poor. He has a lot of assets which solds and uses its money for parties and gambling. Therefore, the Chevalier was forced to borrow money since he was waiting for his money to arrive.
Second, according to the lecture, the Chevalier completed his memoir after many years that meets Voltairs. Hence, it is impossible for him to capture conversations accurately since it happens long time ago. In contrast, the lecturer explains that the Chevalier after meeting the Voltaire wrote what he remembered about their conversation each night. Moreover, there are some witnesses that see the Chevalier consults with others.
Third, based on the passage, the Chaevalier did not escape from ceiling. He had a number of politically well-conected friend who offered bribes to jailer to free him. On the contrary, the speaker assets that copious prisoners had more powerful friends than the Chevalier but they could not escape the prison by bribing. Also, the ceiling of the Chevalier was repaired after his escape and because of that we can conclue he escaped by making a hole in ceiling.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying. 60
- TPO 32 76
- TPO 5 3
- In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. 65
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign country. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, third, well, as for, in contrast, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1373.03311258 97% => OK
No of words: 261.0 270.72406181 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08429118774 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62395329037 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 145.348785872 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582375478927 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6979342213 49.2860985944 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.7857142857 110.228320801 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06452816374 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212149394493 0.272083759551 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071404028032 0.0996497079465 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629104148411 0.0662205650399 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134226785872 0.162205337803 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069113992971 0.0443174109184 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 63.6247240618 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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