TPO INTEGRATE 20
There has been some debates among whether the let it burn are beneficial or not. The lecture says that the let it burn fire policy has many advantages. The reading argues that the policy harm the park.
The first point of dispute is that the yellow stone fire causes tremendous change to the park's trees and vegetation. The lecture says that the after the fire, the appearance of new smaller plant become more easily. According to the lecture some new plant need open unshaded area to grow, also some seeds need to exposed to extreme heat to spread. That is how the fire benefit the park. On the other hand, the reading contradict this point by saying that many vegetation and plants were harmed. All the trees were blackened and devastated.
Another controversial issue is that the wild life of the park was affected by the park fire. The lecture claims that the fire creates new opportunity and ideal life for new animals. For example, rabbits and a hars become inhabitant in the park and as well they have new predators living in the park also. However, the reading disagrees with this point stating that the disruption of animals habitat and the disruption of food chain make it impossible for wild animals to continue living in the park.
The final point of the debate is that the park become less attractive to tourists after the fire. The lecture says that the fire was not the only reasons for all the destruction happened in the park. At that time there was heavy rain and strong wind accompanied to the fire that cause the park to be less attractive to tourists. But since 1988 after the fire there was no evidence for such wind or rain and the visitor started to visit the park. Yet, the reading argues that due to the fire large number of tourists decided to stay away o the park.
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... whether the let it burn are beneficial or not. The lecture says that the let it...
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...urn fire policy has many advantages. The reading argues that the policy harm the ...
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...s and vegetation. The lecture says that the after the fire, the appearance of new smaller pla...
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... many vegetation and plants were harmed. All the trees were blackened and devasta...
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...imals to continue living in the park. The final point of the debate is that th...
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...ists decided to stay away o the park.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, well, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1373.03311258 111% => OK
No of words: 328.0 270.72406181 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63414634146 5.08290768461 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.307360903 2.5805825403 89% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 145.348785872 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487804878049 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 461.7 419.366225166 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.2202157877 49.2860985944 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 110.228320801 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 21.698381199 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 7.06452816374 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 4.19205298013 382% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410251497734 0.272083759551 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152226233873 0.0996497079465 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640435685772 0.0662205650399 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255067733706 0.162205337803 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337375034303 0.0443174109184 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 53.8541721854 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.2367328918 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.42419426049 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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