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There has been some debate among whether the zebra fish invasion ca be topped or not. The lecturer says that there are many new methods to control the invasion of the zebra muscles. However, The author of the reading claims that the invasion of the zebra muscles can not be stopped, and the invasion causes serious problems to fresh water fish population.
The first area of dispute is that the history of the zebra muscles invasions suggested that the muscles population might be unstoppable. According to the professor there are new ways to stop the invasion of the zebra muscles, as people now have enough knowledge than before. The ship should required to empty the ballet water which contain a lot of zebra muscles and filled with ocean salt water. The salt water of the ocean will kill the muscles. However, this directly contraindicate the author idea which says that because the muscles are easily attached to the bottom of the ships which have ballast water the muscles invasion can not be stopped.
Another controversial issue is that zebra muscles can easily dominate in their new habitats. The professor says that in the beginning the zebra muscles will not have any predators but by time after the local aquatic birds know that there are a new source of food, the zebra muscles will be eaten by the aquatic birds. So the zebra muscles will not be able to dominate their habitats after a while. But, the author argued that the zebra muscles will dominate the area as they will not have any predators as well as they can easily reproduce and increase in number.
The final point of the debate is that the zebra muscles cause overall decline in the fish populations. The professor argues that the zebra muscles have a negative effect on some fresh water fishes like plankton eater fishes, however they have positive effect on other fishes. According to the professor, the zebra muscles generate some nutrient essential for some fresh water fishes, that way they increase their populations. Yet, the author argued that the zebra threaten the populations of most fresh water fishes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1373.03311258 130% => OK
No of words: 365.0 270.72406181 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90684931507 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35993009047 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 145.348785872 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441095890411 0.540411800872 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 419.366225166 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.9657237941 49.2860985944 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.928571429 110.228320801 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0714285714 21.698381199 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 7.06452816374 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 4.19205298013 406% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285272519491 0.272083759551 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129711682056 0.0996497079465 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352973051298 0.0662205650399 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197493254692 0.162205337803 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186441324998 0.0443174109184 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.3589403974 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 63.6247240618 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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