TPO INTEGRATED 34
There has been some debates why the sea cows population decline. The reading provides three theories for the decline. However, the reading opposes and mentions that all the theories have some problems.
The first point of dispute is if the overhunting by the Siberian people cause the extinction. The lecture says that the sea cows were massive creatures and one of them weight about 10 pounds. One sea cow could feed a whole village of Siberian people for a moth. But the reading refutes, saying that the Siberian people overhunted the sea cows and that leads to the extinction.
another controversial issue is if the ecosystem disturbance cause decline in the kelps population and that lead to the extinction. The lecture contends that the ecosystem had no effect on the kelps population. There were no evidences in the decline in the whales. But, the reading opposes, said that the ecosystem cause decline in the main sources of food for the sea cow. And that lead to the extinction.
The final issue of dispute is if the European fur traders cause the extinction. The lecture says that the sea cow population were already in decline before the arrival of the European fur trader. Other thing caused the extinction. Yet, the reading refutes saying that the European fur trader caught the last sea cow in the island.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cows'' or 'cow's'?
Suggestion: cows'; cow's
...There has been some debates why the sea cows population decline. The reading provide...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he decline. However, the reading opposes and mentions that all the theories have ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...t all the theories have some problems. The first point of dispute is if the ove...
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.... One sea cow could feed a whole village of Siberian people for a moth. But the r...
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...ows and that leads to the extinction. another controversial issue is if the ec...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'kelps'' or 'kelp's'?
Suggestion: kelps'; kelp's
...system disturbance cause decline in the kelps population and that lead to the extinct...
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...xtinction. The lecture contends that the ecosystem had no effect on the kelps po...
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...The lecture contends that the ecosystem had no effect on the kelps population. T...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'kelps'' or 'kelp's'?
Suggestion: kelps'; kelp's
...at the ecosystem had no effect on the kelps population. There were no evidences in ...
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...s population. There were no evidences in the decline in the whales. But, the read...
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... cow. And that lead to the extinction. The final issue of dispute is if the Eu...
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... The final issue of dispute is if the European fur traders cause the extincti...
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...nal issue of dispute is if the European fur traders cause the extinction. The le...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 22.412803532 49% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 1373.03311258 83% => OK
No of words: 232.0 270.72406181 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93534482759 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56896190118 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 145.348785872 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461206896552 0.540411800872 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 337.5 419.366225166 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3297523856 49.2860985944 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.5625 110.228320801 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 21.698381199 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6875 7.06452816374 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 4.33554083885 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.27373068433 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.48112911144 0.272083759551 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1621226777 0.0996497079465 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982297831693 0.0662205650399 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28685566225 0.162205337803 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065493944616 0.0443174109184 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.3589403974 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.8541721854 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 12.2367328918 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.42419426049 86% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 63.6247240618 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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