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There has been some debates among whether the Agnostids were living in the past or not. The reading says that there have been three different theories about where the Agnostids lived. However the lecture disagrees.it claims that all the theories mentioned in the reading had some weakens.
The first area of dispute is that the agnostids were living as a free swimming predators. The lecture says that all swimming predators should have a large developed eyes to help them catch their preys, but the agnostids have had small tiny eyes. They were not able to see well or may be blind. Living as free swimming predators need special other sensory organs in their body to help them to catch their preys, and those special sensory organs were not found in the fossils of the agnostids. However, the reading says that some of the agnostids are strong predators and active swimmers which help them to live as free swimming predators.
Another controversial issue is that the agnostids were dwellers of the sea flower. The lecture claims that sea flower dwellers are moving slowly. They usually localized in one area, on the other hand the agnostids are moving so fast and according to their fossils they were inhabited in many geographical areas. But the reading argues that the agnostids have been living as a sea flower dweller and scavenging dead organisms or grazing on bacteria.
The final point of debate is that the Agnostids were parasites feed on larger organisms . The lecture says that the parasites theory is not true. First the parasites population should not be too large, or it will harm the host they feed on. In the case of the Agnostids there fossils recorded that there population was very large and that contradict the theory that they were living as parasites. Yet, the reading states that many anthropoids that are living those days are parasites, may be the agnostids were also parasites
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 10.4613686534 239% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1373.03311258 120% => OK
No of words: 330.0 270.72406181 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97575757576 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47848695052 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 145.348785872 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463636363636 0.540411800872 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 419.366225166 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4987077414 49.2860985944 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5882352941 110.228320801 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4117647059 21.698381199 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.70588235294 7.06452816374 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 4.19205298013 525% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.482400355611 0.272083759551 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174484632259 0.0996497079465 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930749290611 0.0662205650399 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298875192525 0.162205337803 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533960778994 0.0443174109184 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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