The reading passage suggests three reasons why some archaeologists think the European silver coin found in the United States is a fake rather than a historical remain. However the lecturer disagrees with the statement and offers three arguments.
Firstly, although the coin was far way from the place where a Norse stayed in North America, it doesn't mean that the Native Americans could not move such a long distance to the Norse settlement and brought it back. The lecturer argues that there were other objects that were found as an evidence to show that the Natives traveled around and carried cargos back to the inhabitant.
Second, the writer claims that there were no other coins found in Norse settlement. On the other hand, the lecturer refutes this point and disputes that the Norse did not live in North America forever. They traveled to the State and went back to Europe. There is a possibility that the Norse brought abundant silver coins to the state, and then packed all of them when they headed back to Europe.
Last but not the least, even though the native Americans did not use the silver coins as money, the Norse still could trade with them only if the native people were interested in those beautiful coins. The natives could make use of the sparkling and shiny coins to make jewelry such as necklace.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...a fake rather than a historical remain. However the lecturer disagrees with these state...
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Line 1, column 205, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this statement' or 'these statements'?
Suggestion: this statement; these statements
...in. However the lecturer disagrees with these statement and offers some arguments. Firstly, al...
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Line 2, column 97, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ere a Norse stayed in North America, it doesnt mean that the Norse cannot move to such...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 1373.03311258 72% => OK
No of words: 210.0 270.72406181 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71904761905 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21776480395 2.5805825403 86% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590476190476 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 419.366225166 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5577910866 49.2860985944 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1 110.228320801 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 21.698381199 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06452816374 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.44785751366 0.272083759551 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160167968664 0.0996497079465 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843193516326 0.0662205650399 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245308721745 0.162205337803 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194872171765 0.0443174109184 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.2367328918 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 63.6247240618 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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