tpo05
The reading text and lecture are both about the how people are used the Chaco Canyon two to three stories building that found in the New Maxico. Lecturer is cast doubt on the author's view by placing his three arguments.
Firstly, The reading passage stats that, this buildings are used a residential purpose by people. Moreover he said that, this infrastructure are worked as a apartment for 100 peoples. However, the lecturer is argues that, If that building is able to accommodate hundreds of people, then there were be also a enough Fire placed for the cooking that 100 peoples. But evidence shows that, there only few fire places are present, which can support 10 families.
Secondly, The other theory of the author suggests that, buildings are used a storage for the food material and people of that era stored a maize grains over there. In other end, the lecturer is contradict that, there is a possibility of storage houses. But, Archeologist did not found various species of maize. not even the big container in which those people are stored this grain at time of excavation.
At the end, Writer of this passage argues that, this buildings are used as a ceremonial events. Additionally, He present the evidence of the archeological report, which showing that, excavators are found the pot and this pot are used in a events. In contrast, the lecturer stats that, excavators also found other material too like a building material material, construction tools, sand etc. So, this will indicate that this houses were places, in which peoples are used to through its used material and pot were the part of their used material.
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Sentence: The reading text and lecture are both about the how people are used the Chaco Canyon two to three stories building that found in the New Maxico.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to stories and building
Sentence: Firstly, The reading passage stats that, this buildings are used a residential purpose by people.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and buildings
Description: The fragment used a residential is not usually preceded by are
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is
Sentence: Moreover he said that, this infrastructure are worked as a apartment for 100 peoples.
Description: The fragment worked as a is not usually preceded by are
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is
Sentence: However, the lecturer is argues that, If that building is able to accommodate hundreds of people, then there were be also a enough Fire placed for the cooking that 100 peoples.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to is and argues
Sentence: But evidence shows that, there only few fire places are present, which can support 10 families.
Description: The fragment are present , is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace present with adjective
Sentence: Secondly, The other theory of the author suggests that, buildings are used a storage for the food material and people of that era stored a maize grains over there.
Description: The fragment maize grains over is not usually followed by there
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace there with their
Sentence: In other end, the lecturer is contradict that, there is a possibility of storage houses.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and contradict
Sentence: At the end, Writer of this passage argues that, this buildings are used as a ceremonial events.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and buildings
Description: The fragment used as a is not usually preceded by are
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is
Sentence: Additionally, He present the evidence of the archeological report, which showing that, excavators are found the pot and this pot are used in a events.
Description: A WH-determiner is not usually followed by a verb, present participle or gerund
Suggestion: Refer to which and showing
Sentence: In contrast, the lecturer stats that, excavators also found other material too like a building material material, construction tools, sand etc. So, this will indicate that this houses were places, in which peoples are used to through its used material and pot were the part of their used material.
Description: The fragment material material contains a repeated word
Suggestion: Delete a possible duplicate word:
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and houses
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a preposition
Suggestion: Refer to to and through
Description: The fragment the part of is not usually preceded by were
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace were with was
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 15 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 18 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 15 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 12
No. of Words: 277 250
No. of Characters: 1314 1200
No. of Different Words: 139 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.08 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.744 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.466 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 90 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 65 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 42 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 19 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.083 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.995 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.583 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.367 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.596 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.088 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4