TPO.14
This set of the material in both reading an lecture is about applying salvage logging, eliminating dead trees, to tackle forest fires in northwestern in USA. The reading mentions that this way would be beneficial for both conserving environment and economic profits. On the other hand, the speaker states that although this approach seems effective, it causes long-term environmental damage.
First, employing this method which helps forest to recover as soon as possible means creating more space for new and fresh trees to grow. The lecturer opposes this point by saying that if the dead tress re...
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Dear teacher, Here, due to
Dear teacher,
Here, due to Sentence-Sentence Coherence, I've got low score. Am I right? Could you please tell me which part of my essay lack this coherence which result in my low score?
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Not because of coherence but
Not because of coherence but overall performance. 26 is not a low score. We rarely give score over 27.
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Here, due to Sentence-Sentence Coherence, I've got low score. Am I right? Could you please tell me which part of my essay lack this coherence which result in my low score?
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Sentence: The lecturer opposes this point by saying that if the dead tress remove from the forest quickly after destructive fire, soil will be deprived of nutrition prodeced by these dead trees.
Error: prodeced Suggestion: produced
Sentence: Second, the reading describes since these dead trees are considered as good habitats for infectious insects, this spproach would lead to the healthier forest.
Error: spproach Suggestion: approach
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 26 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 11 12
No. of Words: 257 250
No. of Characters: 1325 1200
No. of Different Words: 160 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.004 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.156 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.55 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 98 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 70 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 50 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.364 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.467 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.727 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.363 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.611 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.06 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4