tpo14
Both the reading and lecture are about Salvage logging which is a method for gathering dead trees and cleaning the forest after burning in fire. The reading provides three reasons that this approach is advantageous and then supports them. The lecture casts doubt on the claims made in the article. The professor believes that Salvage logging can create serious long-term problems; meanwhile he finds all reasons dubious.
First of all, the author of reading contends that the dead trees take a long time to decompose; hence, if we remove these trees from the forest, new space will be establish and it will allow the forest to grow quickly. This point is challenged by the lecturer. The professor declares that gathering and cleaning dead trees is not vital for the growth of the new trees. One should not forget that since dead trees gradually decay, they will be able to provide some nutrition for the soil and other small organisms.
Secondly, the article states that decaying wood is a perfect place for a type of beetle which is called spruce bark beetle and it can ruin the fresh condition of forest. This argument is rebutted by the professor. She claims that these types of beetles have lived for a long time in the forest without any serious damage. The lecturer elaborates on this by mentioning that besides this beetle, the decaying trees are the best habitats for other insects and birds that they contribute to maintain the forest in a health circumstance.
Finally, the reading passages proposes that Salvage logging can be helpful in economic field because wood industries can obtain numerous wood and also they can hire more staff for gathering dead trees; consequently, the unemployment will be reduced. On the other hand, the professor refutes this statement. She expresses that the economic benefits of this approach will not be noticeable because the industries have to use a lot of mechanical devices and also helicopters; subsequently, this can reduce economic profits and also these types of jobs will be permanent just for local people not in global level.
- tpo25 86
- sometimes filmmakers make movies that are based on books When a movie is based on a book some people prefer to read the book before watching the movie Other people prefer to read the book only after they have watched the movie Which do you prefer and why 55
- do you prefer to give money for which type of activity:providing food and house for poor peoplegiving money to poor people for starting the small businessmedical care 90
- tpo29 71
- Do you agree or disagree? It is important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. 90
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 299, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...oubt on the claims made in the article. The professor believes that Salvage logging...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, finally, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 5.04856512141 257% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1373.03311258 127% => OK
No of words: 348.0 270.72406181 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01724137931 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50155850483 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 145.348785872 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 419.366225166 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.4162868039 49.2860985944 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.4 110.228320801 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 21.698381199 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06452816374 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 4.45695364238 224% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412918727848 0.272083759551 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123546094801 0.0996497079465 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943240357874 0.0662205650399 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244260417453 0.162205337803 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178006372066 0.0443174109184 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 63.6247240618 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.