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The lecture and the reading passage both discuss how did the dinosaurs survive the wintertime?. and these dinosaurs lived on the North Slop which was inhospitable during the winter due to total darkness for several months. On the one hand the reading stat that they survived the winter bu migrating south to more suitable environment. On the other hand, the lecture refutes this, by stating that the migration not applicable.
First of all, the text claims that during cold and dark climate there was not plant growth which was the main source of food, so they had to migrate to find their food. However, the lecture argues that in the summer the North Slope because of warm weather, the availability of plant was huge , and they can fed on it in summer and in winter they can eat the dry plants.
In addition, the reading makes the arguments is that edmontosaur lived in herd so they migrate with each other. The lecture counter this point by stating that living in herd does not mean migration all the time, and some animals live in herd for protection. And the lecturer state that Alcka lives in herd without migration.
Lastly, the reading passage argues that these animals were physically capable to run fast without any complication. The lecture refutes this claims by pointing out that their were juvenile within the herd and they cannot run fast as well as the mature one. Also, the adult cannot leave the youngest alone.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
... the dinosaurs survive the wintertime?. and these dinosaurs lived on the North Slop...
^^^
Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ther, the availability of plant was huge , and they can fed on it in summer and in...
^^
Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'feed'
Suggestion: feed
...bility of plant was huge , and they can fed on it in summer and in winter they can ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, lastly, so, well, in addition, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1373.03311258 87% => OK
No of words: 248.0 270.72406181 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79838709677 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30850695638 2.5805825403 89% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 419.366225166 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3370349541 49.2860985944 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1666666667 110.228320801 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 21.698381199 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06452816374 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286220805893 0.272083759551 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105293690744 0.0996497079465 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568679521812 0.0662205650399 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166565519937 0.162205337803 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058056282604 0.0443174109184 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.3589403974 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.8541721854 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 63.6247240618 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
... the dinosaurs survive the wintertime?. and these dinosaurs lived on the North Slop...
^^^
Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ther, the availability of plant was huge , and they can fed on it in summer and in...
^^
Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'feed'
Suggestion: feed
...bility of plant was huge , and they can fed on it in summer and in winter they can ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, lastly, so, well, in addition, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1373.03311258 87% => OK
No of words: 248.0 270.72406181 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79838709677 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30850695638 2.5805825403 89% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 419.366225166 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3370349541 49.2860985944 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1666666667 110.228320801 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 21.698381199 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06452816374 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286220805893 0.272083759551 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105293690744 0.0996497079465 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568679521812 0.0662205650399 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166565519937 0.162205337803 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058056282604 0.0443174109184 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.3589403974 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.8541721854 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 63.6247240618 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.