TPO30-W1
The reading and listening matedials have a conflictf opinion of whether it is practical or possible for Greeks to built the burning mirror to cause those ships to catch fire.
Firstly, the author suggests that building such a burning mirror is impossible technologically for Greeks at that time. However, the speaker stand on the point that they do not have to bulit that huge and complicated mirrors with copper, since the experiment have indicated that quanties of smal pices of cooper mirrors can be effective equally. And in that case, technology reason represent will no longer be a convicing support.
Secondly, the passage hold the opinion based on the fact that it will take 10 minutes to make those ships on fire with such mirrors,which is too long. But as the speaker stated that, this conclusion based on the assumption that the ships are consis of wood only, which is usually not the case. In fact, those ships often involve a water-proof layer. And those waterproof materials are much easier to make on fire, only seconds with those burning mirror. So, it is practical to use burning mirror to set ships on fire.
Thirdly, the writer think that with flaming arrows, it is not necesary to built burning mirrors to set ships on fire, cause the former can be effective at the same distance. On the contrary, at the view of the lecturer, the burning mirror attacting will the enemies surprisingly while the flaming arraows will give the enemies enough time to be prepared.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing mirror to cause those ships to catch fire. Firstly, the author suggests th...
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Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing mirror is impossible technologically for Greeks at that time. However, the s...
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Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cally for Greeks at that time. However, the speaker stand on the point that they...
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Line 3, column 394, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n that case, technology reason represent will no longer be a convicing support. ...
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Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Secondly, the passage hold the opinion based on the fact that it will take 10 ...
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Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hold the opinion based on the fact that it will take 10 minutes to make those sh...
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Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...ke those ships on fire with such mirrors,which is too long. But as the speaker stated ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, in fact, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1373.03311258 90% => OK
No of words: 254.0 270.72406181 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87007874016 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52626171724 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535433070866 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 419.366225166 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3543837201 49.2860985944 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.454545455 110.228320801 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 21.698381199 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06452816374 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.436152636706 0.272083759551 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173798252903 0.0996497079465 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102038273479 0.0662205650399 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274365419803 0.162205337803 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298708177455 0.0443174109184 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.3589403974 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.