TPO31
The professor in the lecture is discussing a fossil skeleton of a dinosaur. she claims the fine lines surrounding the skeletal bones are feathers of a dinosaur, this idea is totally different from the reading passage.
First, the professor disappoints the fine lines may not a functional structure of a living dinosaur. she believes the fine lines are not dinosaurs' fiber because we could not see the same fossil on other types of dinosaurs. she claims these are feathers.
The second reason why the professor disagrees the uncertainty that the fine lines are feather or frills. actually, the professor mentions scientists can check the fact by the chemical composition in them. The result said that the fine lines are more close to feathers.
Last, the professor gives an example of Pika to explain the usages of feathers are not just helping to fly or keep their internal temperature. They also have another function -- displaying. actually, the fine lines are colorful and located along the tail, which all show that the main usage may be display themselves.
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- independent essay-TPO46 3
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- Tpo46 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...ussing a fossil skeleton of a dinosaur. she claims the fine lines surrounding the s...
^^^
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...ctional structure of a living dinosaur. she believes the fine lines are not dinosau...
^^^
Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...ame fossil on other types of dinosaurs. she claims these are feathers. The secon...
^^^
Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Actually
...t the fine lines are feather or frills. actually, the professor mentions scientists can ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 191, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Actually
...so have another function -- displaying. actually, the fine lines are colorful and locate...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, if, may, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 22.412803532 58% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 30.3222958057 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 1373.03311258 65% => OK
No of words: 176.0 270.72406181 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07954545455 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 4.04702891845 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65847876358 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 145.348785872 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607954545455 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 419.366225166 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9243925971 49.2860985944 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2727272727 110.228320801 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 21.698381199 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 7.06452816374 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342286043532 0.272083759551 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130183685306 0.0996497079465 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820790819607 0.0662205650399 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20745799063 0.162205337803 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587719315337 0.0443174109184 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 63.6247240618 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.