TPO41
In the lecture, the professor talked about if it is necessary to have a strict rule for coal ash. Disputing the passage's argument that there are many disadvantages to having stricter regulations, she cited several points show that the rule should be stricter.
First, she argued that the existed regulation was not sufficient. For examples, the regulation just requires companies to use liner; however, it only can prevent the soil from polluting. there is a risk that if the coal ash is poured into water, it would influence the safety of drinking water, even though they have used the liner. This argument contradicts the claim in the passage that the existed rule is already enough.
Second, the professor said consumers would continue to buy products which use recycled coal ash. if the companies have the experience and used to producing recycled coal ash products, consumers would prefer to trusting their abilities and still consuming.
Third, the professor dismissed the argument in the passage that new regulation would lead to an increase in cost. she admitted that the price of energy would increase, but it is worthy. After the stricter regulation, the government could reduce the spending on protecting the environment about 15 billion dollars; nevertheless, there is just 1% increase in the price paid by all households.
- Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. 66
- TPO46 63
- TPO32#1 65
- independent essay-TPO46 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'passages'' or 'passage's'?
Suggestion: passages'; passage's
...strict rule for coal ash. Disputing the passages argument that there are many disadvanta...
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Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...ly can prevent the soil from polluting. there is a risk that if the coal ash is poure...
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Line 11, column 98, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...y products which use recycled coal ash. if the companies have the experience and u...
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Line 11, column 211, Rule ID: PREFER_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'trust'?
Suggestion: trust
...ash products, consumers would prefer to trusting their abilities and still consuming. ...
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Line 15, column 115, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...tion would lead to an increase in cost. she admitted that the price of energy would...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, still, third, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 1373.03311258 83% => OK
No of words: 217.0 270.72406181 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24884792627 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72203208736 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585253456221 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 419.366225166 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7061633606 49.2860985944 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.545454545 110.228320801 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 21.698381199 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06452816374 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416414967549 0.272083759551 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144537544939 0.0996497079465 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934430066817 0.0662205650399 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234772982685 0.162205337803 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820715059229 0.0443174109184 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.3589403974 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.